| "Egypt Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I can guess who the worthy hubby's gonna be...Heh heh heh...But I won't say anything and spoil it for everybody else...I'm not mean like that...Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 17:11 CST
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X_X so short... so good... >_< these are shorter then my chapters... well anyways good fic ^_^ update soon? please???
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 15:59 CST
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SWEET! ooooh, the plot thickens!!!AWESOME! ok, hope ya update soon! i am very happy!
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Title: tanwen-whitefire
Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 17:05 CST
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what? you were right, that was short! hope ya update soon! this looks really good, even though half the time i dont understand a word they say. i can understand the cockney, not the arabic. argh!!!
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Title: tanwen-whitefire
Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 16:40 CST
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really awesome, adn all the better since it's i/k. unless that means inu/kik...i hope not!
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Reviewed By: silveredge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 13:55 CST
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good story... heres a question is inu still a hanyou? is there still demons?...
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Title: iNU-YASHA IN EYGPT!! * ROTFL/LMBAO *
Reviewed By: Meh ( Keyiotuo ) On: November 19, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In case you people don't know what rotfl is it's rolling on the floor laughing & lmbao is laughing my bloody ass off. Sorry 'bout the name the computer won't put Keyiotuo ( that's my name ).Well I'm hooked!!!!! you must finish thi syou wouldn't keep your fans waiting would you?... no.. of course not * cough cough hack hack * heh. ^_^0 well it's diiferent settings than the ones I read but that's alsome!! new places & I have to ask: How do you know Arabic so well? ( you can answer if you want I'm justing asking ) Now you have to finish this story or I'll go crazy..wiat too late!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * sweatdrop * ok that was freaky. Sorry 'bout that my other sides get a bit out of hand just spray them with water they should calm down or lock them in the closet. Ja ne!!!!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while, but it was well worth the wait! Cool, I love reading the arabic language! It's soo cool! It makes me wanna watch the Mummy movies! Keep going! I wanna see when and where and how Inuyasha and Kagome meet! Ja ne for now!
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Title: Yeah!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There he is! I was beginning to wonder if this was going to be a Sessh/Kags fic, 'cause I hadn't heard any mention of Inu anywhere. Man, I'm glad that confusion is over. Wow, nice job with the muslim and egyptian translation. That must be fun to be studying that culture. I've always found egyptian history interesting. This fic is definitely original, and I'm really enjoying it. Thanks for the awesome update! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Leisa On: September 03, 2004 17:49 CDT
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Hey, interesting story. A little bit of nit picking . . 1)If Naraku is a lord, he would be addressed as "my lord", not "your grace" which is an address only for a duke or duchess. 2)In Victorian England, a single woman from a "nice" family would never travel alone, only with family members. It would be obvious Kagome was not an aristocrat just by the fact that she did not even come aboard with her own servants. But I understand why you couldn't work these little things into the story . . . btw, when's Inuyasha going to show up? And hopefully Kouga and Kagura too? Keep it up :)
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Title: All right!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chappie!!! I liek this fic, and yes, please keep writing, at least for me? You did well with the cockney english. I remember when I was a part of the play "My Fair Lady" and I was one fo the people who spoke cockney on a recording. Keep going, and I'm glad Sango and Kags are together. It's just not right if they aren't at least friends, know what I mean? Plus, I can't wait to see what happens next, but I'm not impatient or anything. My philosophy is, "You can't rush the art or the artist. Otherwise, it just will not come out completely right." Thanks for the update! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: INUYASHA RULES!!! On: August 17, 2004 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite original and I hope u update soon for I do wish to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story and not cliche at all. I can't wait to read what happens to Kagome in Egypt. Keep writing and update soon!
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