"To Die is Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Angst. It's what's fer dinner. Reviewed By: Dancing_Kitsune On: July 11, 2005 23:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow.......Yeah....It's a really angsty ficcy, I give you that. I like it lots, even thou the fact that two of them died while having sex really made my stomache feel all funky...lol Yeah I think it kinda should do that to ya. Heh. You should write a fic where it's their funerals, or maybe even a combined funeral for them. I would if I was any good at writing, but sadly I'm not ^ ^; Well, good ficcy.
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Reviewed By: 0_o On: June 23, 2005 09:54 CDT Comment/Review: Not sure what to say... Maybe something between "You bastard." and "Wow, nice fic" So sad...
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 18:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! I may NOT have liked the death but at least they all died together.That was really sad but I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 06:27 CDT Comment/Review: wow....that so...*can't find words to decribe* wow...It's so moving. I'm a fan of having Kouichi as uke but this is an acception. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: G.K On: August 18, 2004 00:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I "love" angsty fics especially really angsty ones & death fics to so when I see one it's a treat for me I don't see to many good & really angsty fics out there good job. It needs more detail though I don't think you should have made it a one-shot I think if you had a little more detail & more of a plot you could have made this into an even better story. good job though I really liked it. ^_^
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