| "Lost Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Lemon!
Reviewed By: animefangal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D_I_B: I loved your fanfiction. It was excellent! Riku: Perverted chick! D_I_B: GET USED TO IT! Jaz Landers: More importantly I saw a few missing apostraphes but other than that all of your work for this fanfiction! And that was a lemon on part three... but if there is more please email it to me inuyasha_n_miroku_yum_12@yahoo.com so that I can read it and be a very very happy chick! -Athena A. Almond
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Reviewed By: Mandeth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed! I cried and I did the hokey pokey, but besides that it was beautifully done. Riku was a naughty boy...xp anyway continue to write and well...that's all I can think of! Update soon! ^-^
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Title: so cute
Reviewed By: Babytenshi On: October 08, 2004 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its cute here's my email yamihakari@msn.com c u la8er bye!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE DAM U!!! hurry... plz? **pouts** wat u meen leve email fer lemon... ur ganna post it rite? u better, kuz this is an awsum... AWSUM!!! fic... so u best update... ya... well... byz... ^_^
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