| "Releasing Her Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: NekuYasha ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 19:45 CST
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Hiya! I know it's been a while but I finally caught up on the last of these chapters. I Love where this is going! I'm just sad that it's stopped. q.q What's happening now? And who is Psyon? Is he an OC? I just haven't heard of him before. Well, anyway, waiting intently for the next chappie! ~NekuYasha
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Title: i tell you what.... wow
Reviewed By: sir lynn of the fred (don't ask) On: June 18, 2005 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's especially cool cuz i had a similar idea for a fan fic. This is just too cool for words. i was thinking that maybe if you're having trouble with writers block you could use this: Raven said her father wanted her to have a demon child. What if she decides to have someone beat him to the punch? it's just an idea. Please feel free to use it! Keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: i tell you what.... wow
Reviewed By: sir lynn of the fred (don't ask) On: June 17, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's especially cool cuz i had a similar idea for a fan fic. This is just too cool for words. i was thinking that maybe if you're having trouble with writers block you could use this: Raven said her father wanted her to have a demon child. What if she decides to have someone beat him to the punch? it's just an idea. Please feel free to use it! Keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 16:25 CDT
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Okay, I know it's been a LONG time sense I reviewed, but I'm doing it now so I hope you'll forgive. This is awesome, the whole thing seems to ooze with visuals, you paint a really nice mental picture. My favorite part is still the one where you describe the picture that Robin painted. Way to go on the whole thing and hurry to update I wanna read more^^ ~~The truly wise express themselves for in expressions we find happiness~~ PS~ Way to go on the Jinx thing I thought that was a way cool idea^^
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Reviewed By: AzarathMetrionZinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:33 CDT
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I may have already said this in an email, but this is a really good fic you have here, and I'm looking forward to updates....it's handled really well, and everything flows together nicely.
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Reviewed By: gothic_raven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 23:47 CST
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its really good!i hope that you add more to it and that you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dragon_slayer On: March 12, 2005 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's awesome so far. Please update!!!!!
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Title: very cool
Reviewed By: soul_stealer_25 On: March 08, 2005 17:46 CST
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Very cool. Nice work. I hope you update soon.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: goth_chick On: March 07, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, i hope that you update soon!!
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Title: umm not bad
Reviewed By: Kevin mask [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i like this could some peeps take i look at my fic its called 'the special school' sorry about the advertising, yeah a slight lack of orginality but it is definatly compensated for p.s. if anyone has msn the add me please my addy is untouchable_dr_of_thuganomic@hotmail.com
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Title: Okay, Okay...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still a bit short, but better than the last chapter. Please don't turn Terra evil again, I like Terra.
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Title: That was Great!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Raven's emotions are so cute! But Raven's specialty is dumb-ass. It's the one emotion that will never show up because she herself personifies it fine all by her lonesome. Although I like how she agreed to talk to Robin if he'd paint her room. And if it 'takes awhile', that gives them plenty of time for interaction, which in their case usually means trouble! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh.. *goes insane* im dying here..make it longer these short chapters are killing me...i cant wait to read more. thsi stpry is major spiffy thanks for letting the public read it...
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Title: BLARGH! TOO DAMNED SHORT!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right, Zea, you get marked down because it was so short! But that's really the only reason. Pretty cool, having Raven's emotions working together against her like that. It's like, literally, no one, not even Raven, knows what's going on inside her head. Keep it up!And, as to the BLARGH *Saint Raven spears Jedi_Zea)
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Reviewed By: Kinsha *it won't let me stay logged in* *stupid comp...* On: February 13, 2005 16:30 CST
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really good. keep writing it. nekuyasha's right, dick does fit him. lol n e way you should try to bring some other problems with other characters too, so its not all about robin and raven. have like cy and bb get into a fight over a video game or something like that. hehe felt like putting pretty colors in today. :)
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