| "Releasing Her Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragon_slayer On: March 12, 2005 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's awesome so far. Please update!!!!!
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Title: very cool
Reviewed By: soul_stealer_25 On: March 08, 2005 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Very cool. Nice work. I hope you update soon.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: goth_chick On: March 07, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, i hope that you update soon!!
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Title: umm not bad
Reviewed By: Kevin mask [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i like this could some peeps take i look at my fic its called 'the special school' sorry about the advertising, yeah a slight lack of orginality but it is definatly compensated for p.s. if anyone has msn the add me please my addy is untouchable_dr_of_thuganomic@hotmail.com
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Title: Okay, Okay...
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still a bit short, but better than the last chapter. Please don't turn Terra evil again, I like Terra.
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Title: That was Great!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Raven's emotions are so cute! But Raven's specialty is dumb-ass. It's the one emotion that will never show up because she herself personifies it fine all by her lonesome. Although I like how she agreed to talk to Robin if he'd paint her room. And if it 'takes awhile', that gives them plenty of time for interaction, which in their case usually means trouble! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh.. *goes insane* im dying here..make it longer these short chapters are killing me...i cant wait to read more. thsi stpry is major spiffy thanks for letting the public read it...
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Title: BLARGH! TOO DAMNED SHORT!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right, Zea, you get marked down because it was so short! But that's really the only reason. Pretty cool, having Raven's emotions working together against her like that. It's like, literally, no one, not even Raven, knows what's going on inside her head. Keep it up!And, as to the BLARGH *Saint Raven spears Jedi_Zea)
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Reviewed By: Kinsha *it won't let me stay logged in* *stupid comp...* On: February 13, 2005 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
really good. keep writing it. nekuyasha's right, dick does fit him. lol n e way you should try to bring some other problems with other characters too, so its not all about robin and raven. have like cy and bb get into a fight over a video game or something like that. hehe felt like putting pretty colors in today. :)
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: shadow3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb. I like the Robin/Raven love twist and how their relationship is slowly blossoming. Please right more because this is one of the best teen titans fics at the moment.
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Title: Awesome yet again!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha :) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 08:19 CST
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That chapter was great yet again, if not somewhat short. I still liked it, especially since Raven is slowly FINDING OUT secrets as well as sharing them. And I agree, Dick DOES fit him, especially after having trained under 'Mr. Corncob Derrier, Batman. There are just some things you wish he WOULDN'T have picked up....*sigh* Anyway, as soon as I have another day off, I'll reread through some of the chapters and e-mail you with some of the stuff that caught my attention. Till next chapter, Keep up the great work!
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Title: Flipping Awesome!
Reviewed By: Nekuyasha :) On: January 29, 2005 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this is like the most awesome Teen Titans Fanfic I've yet to read! I really look forward to reading more! I love how you incorporated D&D into this and how Raven is using this to Bring out her dreams and fears. I'm an avid RPG-er and this really hits home, plus I love the Robin/Raven match up. The only complaints I could possibly have is: that here and there words seem to be missing or out of order, but I do that myself when I'm excitedly writing away; Also, the way it seems you don't really like Terra with the way you make her so rude and over-bearing towards BB; And lastly that I can't wait for you to update again!!! :) I love it and look forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't give marks above eight; (Although this is only the second fic I've reviewed) I think this is a total and solid nine. Raven is spilling her feelings and the others have no Idea (Except maybe Cy) This I find very amusing please add more to the fic, I wish to see what Raven blows up next in her emotional maelstrom and what will happen next in the game. ~~The truly wise express themselves, for in expressions we find happiness~~
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Title: Woohoo! Robin no go boom!
Reviewed By: CAMintmier (not logged in) On: January 22, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Robin didn't get blown up :p Lol. Just wondering, the next chapter you write, are you gonna have it as what happened in Raven and Star's "Girl talk"? I'd love to know how that went. Have fun, and thanx for writing this story. :D
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Reviewed By: Kinsha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
dude UPDATE!!! i neeeed 2 know what happens next! lol
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