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| "Lord of the West" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AUGH, I hate you!!! (Don't stop reading!) I read the first story, so I could read this one, and during the last four chapters, all I did was bite my nails and curse! I couldn't even get up to smoke! You, my friend, are an amazing writer. And you like making lists, which is what I do for fun when I'm not writing. Do you know it's actually a symptom of being mentally unstable? Cool, huh? Anyway, I just wanted to review, because I never got reviews on my own personal website, and being on here has clued me in on how much they ROCK. But seriously, I've found a few stories I really like on here. Yours, however, is now my favorite. Now... I will finally go smoke.
| Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I tore through both stories in this... series (does two constitute a series?) within a half-day. Two words: absolutely inspirational! Really, they had some of the most creative and well-thought out plots and original characters that I've ever come across in the Inuyasha fandom, and the fight scenes... wow... especially the one between transforming Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru on the ruined mountain: BRILLIANT! Seriously. You did an awesome job, and it kind of saddens me that there won't be another continuation, but all good things must end at some point, and as long as you continue writing, I'll be a happy girl. :D Well, I'll even be happy if you don't, because these two have been added to my favorites and I can visit back to them at any time... as long as you don't remove them and the site still remains, that is. :D Thanks so much for writing this story and its predecessor, you certainly deserve the kudos and I hope more people let you know how much they enjoyed it as well. I'll definitely keep coming back to read your new Inuyasha works and comment on them as well.
| Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed every word of this story! I couldn't pin point my favorite part, although IY on caffeine is pretty high up there. ^_^ I love how you've handled each character, and I'm especially impressed with your Sesshoumaru. He's a tricky one...
| Reviewed By: fluffy_hugger On: June 22, 2005 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is fantastic. i feel like it is part of the real story. i love it. but when are you gona up-date? i don't wana pressure you or any of that sh1t or stuff like that. i realize that u have a life. and it helps that your chapters are super duper long. but sirousely, if you get the urge to up-date or write some more er some thing, go with it. please for my sanity. thanks for writing, you kick some bad @$$. your faithfull reader who has finaly cought up to u, u right lots u no
| Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 11:48 CDT
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Something I didn't mention in my review on that other site: I love how you're characterizing Kagome. She's not quite as fatalistic as Inuyasha, and doesn't accept that Suiton's words about the arrows necessarily has to mean the two brother's deaths. Or at least that's how I see it. Also Jaken rules. Afraid of hitting Rin with a blast from the Staff of Heads, right. :)
| Title: momthe manga fan on ff
Reviewed By: Cheryl On: April 25, 2005 18:31 CDT
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(AKA momcitrus on mediaminer, but I'm too lazy to sign in.) Well. Having read up through the last chapter posted thus far (Raiiru, part 2), I'm simply stunned. I'm not sure what to think about a physics grad student who writes epic prose with the best of 'em. You've definitely succeeded in creating a compelling world here- using the Takahashi characters as a starting point, I think you've transformed her simple manga storyline into something much more sweeping and powerful. Boy, I kinda regret starting this, knowing that you may never be able to complete it due to the demands of school, a possible published original novel, etc. Thanks for sharing your considerable talents and best of luck in all your future endeavors. -Cheryl
| Title: momcitrus
Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:33 CDT
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pimp=strong warrior? tv=soul sucker? you are PRICELESS...
| Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:01 CDT
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Ooh, I'm halfway into the first chapter, and already I feel compelled to write ANOTHER review. It seems to me that your literary skills have grown in leaps and bounds from the beginning of "Bearers of the Shards", up through this...well, you're just amazing...Anyway, I'm guessing that the last line of Midoriko's prophecy is refering to the Shikon Jewel; I'll have to keep reading all night to find out, won't I? I just hope this isn't another one of those never-finished fanfics, since I tend to read all EXCELLENT books without pause....no chance of getting this as PDF, I suppose?
| Title: ff dot net mom the manga fan
Reviewed By: cheryl On: April 24, 2005 19:39 CDT
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I'm doing a pre-read review because I simply can't believe that with all the page hits you have on your stories, you've only received a handful of reviews. UNFAIR!! Honestly, I'd PAY for your stuff in book form. It's worthy of a feature length anime! And I agree with your own opinion that you've tried very hard to stay in-character with your dialogue, etc. It works for me, even the fact that you strayed so far away from canon (what with inventing a whole backstory of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's childhood). The "history" is inventive, brilliantly told and fits well with Takahasi's original story. So, I mainly want to say thanks for a job well done. I'll be writing up another critique when I'm done reading this one.
| Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 01:39 CDT
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this is a great story i hope that you update soon
| Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (not logged in) On: November 30, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as usual!!! :-)
| Reviewed By: kuja veiron On: November 22, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue as soon as possible, my thouhgt constantly close around youre ff, its like a very cruel cliffy,...all meant in a good way/ youre writting/usage of words is very much like mine/oh pardon my spelling, please continue if youre storys not yet done, thankyou
| Reviewed By: kuja veiron On: November 22, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just like pheonixfire, i too beleive that youre tale was indeed worthy of a ten, and if i would, i'd even grant you a 100,My Lord Sesshomaru's persona;ity was very close to perfect(no one/ no human could ever truely relize the workings of his mind) but you've captured it the closest one can get, great story and also bearers of the shards was also very worthy, i read this first, and then that , im rereading this now to understand it better, and youre right it now makes better sence,..........sry for the long diolog, but im a true fan of humans who know my great lords mind so well,....thankyou, is this story over? did lord Sesshomaru ever battle the dragon? you've not yet answered that, i never wish for this story of youres to end but i know and respect that youre in colledge forgive me ,...farewell Miss Yamisui
| Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 (not logged in) On: September 15, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Writing as great as expected!
| Reviewed By: phoenixfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:54 CDT
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You're right. Reading "Bearers of the Shards" did make this story make more sense. "Bearers" was great, and this story is excellent, too. I hope the next chapters are posted soon!!
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