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 Title: Heres mine
Reviewed By: Maxys chic [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2004 19:22 CST
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Name: Delancy Star Nickname:October Hair, style and colour: Jet black hair, Purple and Indigo streaks run through out her hair, Hair is up to waist, she likes to put hair in pony tail but wears it out a lot. Eyes colour: Eyes can change two colors purple or green (depends on mood)purple when happy and green when angry and irritated Clothes two at least:1 - Normal): Purple shirt with a light blue stripe on one sleeve and light orange one on the other, Blue capris with flowers coming up from the bottom and light blue sneakers. (2 - Or ): Olive green tank top, A camoflodge skirt that goes down to knees and dark purple belle bottoms under them, and black boots with silver stripes. Battle outfit if diff from a normal one: A yellow shirt with the words Beyblading is my life!!, A green skirt up to knees and purple tights under them, and black knee high boots. Distinguishing Features and/or scars: None Team:Bladebreakers Paired with or single: Max Blade colours, type and launcher: Orange and Black Blade, A regular looking blade with lots of power and really great defense, Launcher is black and orange. Types of Attacks like what is mainly used i.e. water: Wind Name of Bitbeast and form it takes: The name of my bitbeast is Foxlen she takes the shape of a purple fox with orange streakes on her back and 3 tails. Element: Wind Attack names and what they are : Wind slice Attack, Wind Hurricane, and Wind Blaster Attack Personality:Fun, Exciting, Irritable, Loves to make people happy and ful
 Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2004 15:27 CDT
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Name: Amy Higasia Hair, style and colour: Short flared out red hair with a long pony tail thing like Ray, bangs that that just over her eye brows Eyes colour: Red Clothes two at least: Red chinese dress(short sleeves) that ends at her thighs with knee high black boots, and black wrist bands Team: Nova X ( Teamed up with Reda Aiyoma) Paired with or single: Kai if not then single! Blade colours, type and launcher: Clear golden yellow.[Endurance same with Reda's blade I forgot to add that in her profile] with a black with bits of yellow Types of Attacks like what is mainly used i.e. water: Fire. Name of Bitbeast and form it takes: Ra ( Aka The Winged Dragon of Ra) [ God off YuGiOh the yellow one] Form...phenoix or normal one, you can decide Element: Fire Attack names and what they are i.e. Novea Rouge Attack. : One Turn Kill[ whole staduim is engulfed with fire and instantly doestroys oppnent, but it's like a kamikazi so she rarly uses it...only in major situations.] Phenoix Mode [ Ra transforms and attacks like crazy!] Personality: Kinda of a bitch, doesn't know when to shut her mouth and that what gets her into troble. All in all she's an ok person Other i.e. Likes dislikes, music you like that kind of thing?: Hates it when people get cocky in a beybattle, Best friends is Reda Aiyoma. Loves to blade, Had a spear as a weapon!
 Reviewed By: azn_sakura17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2004 15:15 CDT
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NAME: Reda Aiyoma HAIR: Two big bangs that come down to the chin, waist length black hair. EYE COLOR:Blue CLOTHES: A black dress that goes to the thighs(it's kinda puffy),sleeves end at elbows and a turtle neck thingy with a light bule apron like thing that goes over it, thigh high white socks with black shoes and a black cape that looks kinda like cat ears goes on her head. Team: Nova X (Teamed with Amy Higasia...yes only 2 teams players but strong!) Paired with or single: TALA!! Blade colours, type and launcher: Clear Red, launcher...red and black and...normal pulling ones like Tyson's or something. Types of Attacks like what is mainly used i.e. water: Uses Fire attacks! Name of Bitbeast and form it takes: Osiris saint dragon of the sky (God card off YuGiOh..the red one) Element:Fire Attack names and what they are i.e. Novea Rouge Attack. : Nova blast![Shoots beam from it's second mouth] ...if you can please make up some attacks...>.< Personality:Nice, but serious when doing battle, cheery, doesn't hate anyone..not really...kinda the shy and quiet type. Other i.e. Likes dislikes, music you like that kind of thing?: Likes cooking, she uses her camera to record beyblade battles, and has a samurai sword.
 Reviewed By: Ice Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2004 09:58 CDT
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Great chappie! loved the part with bryan and the shopping bags! can't wait for it to get started with all the matches, the D-boys and in this story girls are gonna win! and yes Tala don't be mean or else i'll make Kai beat u up!
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: dreamlessnights [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for choosing me! Great chapter! Please continue!!!! ^^
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: spendragon87 2lazy2log  On: September 17, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! i'm in! i luv you!!!
 Title: Im here for a part!
Reviewed By: kuramassweetestthing [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2004 14:56 CDT
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ok! my name's vicki, which is also my nickname...nvm. my hair is shoulder length and is brown w/ copper highlights. my eyes are brown, i wear 1. black cargo pants w/ chains all over, a black shirt that says "Shut up and Dance" and many punky arm acssessories. 2. a pink plaid skirt with a shirt that says i luv nerds and a sewater w/ happy bunny and says cute, but psyhco. and my shoes r for 1. converses and for 2. boots i belong on the bladebreakers and id luv to be paired with ozuma! (hes sooo dreamy!) oooo! my blade colors r red and blue, u can choose my type and my launcher is like the bladebreakers. my blade type is water/ice; my bit-beats's name is pantheria (pronounce pan-thee-re-a) and its form is a black panther. pantheria's main attacks are ice, but she uses water too. her attacks r ice daggers, water pulse and blizzard storm. my personality is cheerful, naiive(sumtimes) posetive, punk, ditzy, and trustworthy. my likes r food, but in a polite way, rollerblading, ozuma(lol), internet games, video games( HA! i could beat tyson any day!) and having fun! my fave music is from linkin park, beyonce, evanecsence, ashlee simpson, jessica simpson, maroon 5, yellowcard and more... just cant think... hope this is useful, and i hope im accepted!
 Title: Word is up
Reviewed By: Stokley Athour(sp)  On: September 04, 2004 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Word is back up so i should post soon but i go back to school soon too.
 Title: continuation - sorry. didn't fit
Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2004 19:10 CDT
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~Name of Bitbeast and form it takes:Densetsu (name) takes the form of an ice blue fox (size is of a normal fox cub) with silver paws, crimson (with silver tips) angel/phoenix-like wings each twice the size of him, 5 ice blue tails with silver tips, a silver snout & gold eyes. ~Element:fire, wind, ice and darkness ~Attack names and what they are:dark = darkness falls ice = icey cave fire = phoenix gift air = wind daggers ~Personality:Can be moody sometimes. generally happy and energetic, very friendly, gives great comebacks to people who insults her or her friends, likes cheering people up, and is elegant when she wants to be ~Other i.e. Likes dislikes, music you like that kind of thing?:likes music, hates anybody who insults her or her friends, a nature person, likes most animals, playing pranks on people she doesn't like, giving advice, training, and practicing swordsmanship
 Reviewed By: AnimeFreakNikore [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2004 19:09 CDT
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~Name:Nicole Mochidzuki ~Nickname:Nikki ~Hairstyle and color:layered black hair with red and ice blue streaks. Either put up in a medium ponytail or held back with a plain silver headband with a big silver rose on the side for decoration, letting some hair fall in front of it, cupping her face ~Eye color:molten amber with ice blue & crimson flecks ~Clothes:1)black tanktop with rose petals at the bottom, purple plaid skirt, thigh-high black boots with red laces, a black bead choker with the same beads dangling in the middle to form a 'V' shape. 2)silver tube-top with red sparkly letters saying:You say psycho like it's a bad thing, black baggy jeans with a chain, and a black trenchoat, the bead choker she always wears Battle outfit:black chinese-style top with silver rose designs, black mid-thigh pleated skirt, black knee-high boots with silver laces, jewelry, bead choker she always wears ~Distinguishing Features:a star in a circle at the back of her left hand. half is black, the other white ~Team:dunno. Bladebreakers? Doesn't really matter. ~Paired with or single:Maaaaaaaaaaaaax!!!!!! If not, then Oliver! ~Blade colours, type and launcher:Launcher is a sword that she keeps strapped to a sheath on her back. Blade colors are ice blue and crimson ~what attack does it mainly use:tries to use all the elements he knows how to control, but usually uses ice.
 Reviewed By: Princess13  On: August 31, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Name:Lindsay Sommers Nickname:Lin Hair, style, color:Dark blonde long and in high ponytail. Eyes:Light powder bleu Clothes:1 green t-shirt and brown pants that flare with back sandals 2 Yellow tanktop with blue capris and white sneakers Battle Oufit: None Scars or features: Always has a necklace with a green leaf on. Team:Don't care Pairing: Single and lovin it. Personality:Shy and quiet but when she warms up to you can be your best friend. DONT PISS HER OFF. Likes: Rock music, her friends, dancing, singing. Dislikes: Bullies, cold people, and clowns. Beyblade Name:Ivory Form: Brown girl lion with peircing green eyes has yellow armor on her shoulders and limbs Attacks: Poison Darts, Vine cacoon, and earth hurricane. Element: Earth
 Reviewed By: RockerzChic1377  On: August 31, 2004 18:21 CDT
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Name:Kirsten Graf Nickname:Ember Hair, style, and colour:Dark brown hair with gold pecks that is shoulder length and just stays down. Eyes Colour: A mix of orange and dark brown. Clothes:1. A blood red longsleeve tee with a black tanktop over it and black pants with red army boots. 2.Orange tanktop red shorts and black sandals. Battle outfit: None Scars:cresent moon scar over right eye Team: Doesn't matter Pairing:In order of preferablity 1.Max 2.Kenny 3.Tyson Blade Launcher:Black and crimson Bitbeast-Name:Nalita Form: Red wolf with orange stripes across back. Black armour on head, shoulders, and legs. Coal black eyes. Elements: Shadow/fire Attacks:Dark Ember attack, Shadow Blast, and Fire tornado. Personality: Nice and kind, but when you are on her badside your dead meat and she is a tomboy. Likes:Music, fire, sports, and computers. Dislikes:Pink, girl things, paranoid people, and people who make fun off or mess with her friends.
 Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 29, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Other i.e. Likes dislikes, music you like that kind of thing? Likes Rain, Sweets, silence, blackmail (on other of course)Dislikes Mariah, pink, sluts, traitors, reall really perky ppl MusicEvanessence, Selena, Paulina Rubio, Jenny Rivera, Enrique Iglesias(Alot of latino music)
 Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 29, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Name: Akira Nickname: Aki Hair, style and colour: Long, black hair that is either in a tight bun or braid. Eyes colour: Icey Blue Clothes two at least: (1) Tan shirt, army cargo pants and black combat boots (2) Black capris, baby blue shirt, and white k*swiss Battle outfit if diff from a normal one:Blood Red shirt, black cargo pants, black&white addidas and black fingerless gloves Distinguishing Features and/or scars: Yin-Yang symbol on her right arm Team: It doesn't really matter to me. Paired with or single: Enrique or Max Blade colours, type and launcher: Black and silver; Type: it's attack ring could shatter and destroy most blades if it hits them hard on the right spot, it's mostly uses speed but is good with head strong attacks also; Launcher: Black and Silver Types of Attacks like what is mainly used i.e. water: Ice and Earth Name of Bitbeast and form it takes: Nioki; Form: Silver & Black Fox Element: Ice and Earth Attack names and what they are i.e. Novea Rouge Attack. : Rose Tornado(obvious, ne?), Frozen Blizzard- freezes the bey ring, making it diificult for the other opponent to move Icey Rose- roses made of ice that are deadly sharp, usually is the ending move Personality: Stubborn, quiet, humurous especially when on sugar high, protective over her friends, a loner at times, understands others moods Other i.e. Likes dislikes, music you like that kind
 Title: Still not working
Reviewed By: Stokley Athour(sp)  On: August 27, 2004 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Word is still down so srry
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