"One Weakness" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Administration MMOrg Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 23:29 CDT Comment/Review: It is with great sadness that I must report that Kilala81 (Bobbi) passed away on Tuesday April 24, 2007 after an extended illness. She will be missed by friends and fans alike.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 01:17 CDT Comment/Review: OMG! That was so freaking sad!!! I'm actually crying right now. *sniffles* Powerful imagery and all in all, a poignant story. Very impressive.
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Reviewed By: Shini On: February 07, 2005 17:08 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: This is just so sad. Why did Tenseiga refuse to allow Sesshomaru to bring Rin back to life? He really needs her around, why would the sword keep her from him? *sniffs* This is just...just so sad! Poor Sesshomaru. Poor Rin. The visual imagery really brought the scene to life, when he was in his garden holding Rin's body, standing in the rain. I have tears in my eyes just thinking about it. The story is very well written, but I wish it had had a happy ending where Tenseiga finally allows him to revive her when he realizes just how much he needs her.
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Reviewed By: christinatails (forgot to login) On: September 01, 2004 17:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *sniffles* NOW I'M CRYING! IT'S SO SAD! *blows nose, then wipes tears with another tissue* WHY! WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE THIS WAY! *continues crying*
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Title: Aawh *grabs a tissue* Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I ever login?) On: August 21, 2004 18:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just loved it! I love sad endings (well I'm not that heartless, I just think it's beautiful), and this one was so great! So cute he kept by her all night! I really loved it and I hope you write more! Good luck with other writings, I just wanna say that I'm gona print this one out! (I print out great one shots and place them in a map)! Ja Ne, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: *Bakani Banana* On: August 18, 2004 18:35 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The writing, the imagery you conjured and the perfect application of the lyrics to the scene. Awesome, just awesome.
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