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| "The Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: kitsune thunder dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that...was...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL! PUHLEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE!!!!!!!!!
| Title: The Tournament
Reviewed By: ShadowKitsuneKirby On: September 01, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic. It's preety cool u switch POV's a lot. You're characters r cool too! ja ne
| Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:23 CDT
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Thanks for putting me in your fic, and itwas great!! Your great at fighting sence's, update as soon as you can!!
| Title: info
Reviewed By: lizibeth On: August 18, 2004 05:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Mitchel(female)Powers:1.blizzards 2.Tornados 3.Final attack- combines sylph the cloud dragon and an ice spell: attribute 11, an the result is the final attack(uses up ALMOST all her energy)Spirit Energy: wind and iceWeapons:ninja stars and wooden nunchaku's w/ chainsPhysical Discription: shoulder length black hair in ponytail, blue an green highlights, grey eyes,black shirt, black pants, black trench coat, venomous rebel goggles sometimes worn on forehead.Personality: is a crazy person,can be quite strange and mysterious an once in a while a lonerOther info:can fly, part of a group that is made up of assassins an spies that once was evil. they now work for koenma as payback for killing humans an demons. r used to find info for him an do the dirty work that no one sees or hears about. aren't known very well because theyre usually out of there before anyone can see what they did.
| Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 19:25 CDT
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You fic's great so far! I'm writing a story somewhat like yours, only different, update as soon as you can!! And heres my charter,... Name:Arashi Powers: 1.White water- A ring of water appaers at each side of the opponet, then it wraps around them, getting them wet first, then giving them a shock of lightning, it leaves the opponet paralyzed, well the fighter finishs them off. 2.Chaos of lightning- If the oppoent attacks, a sheald of lightning cames down and blocks,making the attack come back to the oppoent. 3.Water dragon- strongest attack, its like hieis dragon of the darkness flame, only the dragon is a mix of water and lightning. Spirit Energy: Water and lightning Weapons: Chain sickle Physical Description: Crimson red eys, long mid night blue hair,Black pants with a white/ sliver strip going down the side,and a dark blue tank top, on her wrist is a black badanna, chain sickle is at her waist. Personality: Talkative at times,shy, friendly to people she knows, nice, sort of distane Other Important Info: A well know female assassin Makai;because she hasn't been caught, and no one has ever meet her in person. Thats a lot +.+,..well, Thanks for your time!^^
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