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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely awesome, this is one hell of a story. I'm liking the slow burn to the developing relationship between Inu and Kag and the action scenes of the story are the s**t. Could you get the extremely uptight Sango to just let go and show Miroku somethin.
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Reviewed By: IC On: June 28, 2006 13:01 CDT
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AWwwwwwwwww that was so cute
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Title: Congrats you lucky bastard!
Reviewed By: Subtle Serenity(also 2 lazy 2 log in) On: June 28, 2006 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just start off by saying, that I now officially worship the ground you walk on. Let us all bow and worship you, the all mighty! I'm so VERY impressed with this fic. I know that you won't disappoint so update next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Star Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay just found the fic and gotta say im impressed beyond all beliefs.I've seen many people attempt the Kagome-turn-demon plot, but only some have been able execute it quite this well as you have here. On a side note i am at times confused as to where they are: You said they stold the jewel from a new york museum and later bumped into Kagome, but later you said they had just messed with the worst person in California. That threw me off the plot a bit, also is Kagome tainted with cat or wolf blood originally, gets kinda messy in there. Otherwise i want to congratulate you on a thus far beautifully written story and hope this will be updated soon. Kudos, Star
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 22:01 CDT
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very, very cute chapter. i'm really enjoying this story. keep up the good work! :]
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank Goodness. I have been waiting for this chapter for a long time. Your story is very good and I enjoy it very much. To be honest, I feel so bad for Kagome; she's been thrust into this whole new world she knew nothing about, and now she's a demon, too! It has got to be overwhelming for her. Besides that, I love your story and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: holy shit
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21(too lazy to log in) On: May 11, 2006 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, i cant believe you ended it there... awesome story and please, please update as soon as you can. Finals are coming up, i know, but please! you cant leave me there! love the storyline, very original. the best author i've seen in a while. great job. ~Envy
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Reviewed By: candy_gram123412 On: May 11, 2006 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on you know you wanna update we are all waiting for the next chapter!!!!!!! PS. Love the fic!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 17:49 CDT
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tha fic is awsome up date soon
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Title: TOO GOOD TO LET GO
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is sooo cool. I really hope you get the reviews you want so that you'll keep on writing. I really want to see how this pans out.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: May 08, 2006 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: May 05, 2006 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You may want to work on the format of the last chapter you posted though. I'm sure you didn't mean for it to come out like that. And I think it is a great idea that you waiting on the lemon between Inu and Kag. It will seem more believable down the road then just a quick rump now. Anywho, nice story. I can't wait to see more :)
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 16:40 CST
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This is a really great story and I'm dying to know what happens next! Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Knight_Two On: March 07, 2005 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic, I'm waiting to see next chapter.
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (sorry too lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so is kagome a demon now? i hope you updat soon, cuz i really wanna know.
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