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Reviewed By: Josie D. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! It's like once you start reading it, you can stop. You have an amazing talent and I love the characters! Please update soon...oh, and, even if it's business, I don't really like the idea of a Kira/Inu lemon. Please update soon and continue the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Taiyouki On: January 25, 2005 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am of the mind set that i'd rather hear the citisims brfore the applause but in this story i can only find technical critisim which are a good authors right to keep. I was very impressed at your endurance as long chapters are difficult to keep going especially as the story is beggining but you manage to keep very high action and lots of material flowing. i found the almost William Gibson style to be quite intriguing. I would like to hear more about the scenes, the demon club interior would have been interesting. I wonder what sort of decor they would use, and the descriptions of charecters especally the clothing they wear normally. i hope you continue to enjoy writing as i will continue to enjoy reading
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi (not logged in) On: January 25, 2005 00:10 CST
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Yay! Oh thank God you updated! This story is so amazing.. the plot is excellent and the way you word everything is so great. I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work and update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: maleng On: January 24, 2005 16:17 CST
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very interesting indeed... the whole turning something into a different species... very original... and with kira and inuyasha sharing a bed whoooo.... now that is crazy.. well i wait for the next installment
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 03:45 CST
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You finally updated!! And it was an awesome chapter!! This has such a great plot line to it, I'm totally wrapped up in the story. I'll be waiting for you next chapter!!
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Title: just some guy
Reviewed By: sweetinbullits On: December 08, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story,I've read of kag turning demon before but never that way...intresting. anyway update soon. p.s. where's the sex
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Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is awesome! Please update soon. I really like it!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, baby! This story HAS to be one of my favorites now! You're whole twist on the Inu gang is absolutely fabulous! You must have a creative streak a mile wide. Hey, but do me a favor... UPDATE ASAP!! I can't wait to find out what Kag is and what Inu is going to do about it!! GREAT story!!
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Reviewed By: mentallydisturbed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:15 CST
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I'm always so surprised after I read a chapter of this extrodinary story. Chapter after chapter I can barely wait until an update. Your story is one of the best I've ever seen, and I can tell you that it is one of my favorites. You've got a very creative mind and I thought the way you described the scene when Inuyasha and Kouga were fighting, and Kagome had turned all 'demon' on them. Simply splendid. Keep up the good work, and don't rush yourself. You've got a great story working for yourself here, and if you ever abandon this idea, then my god you'd have to be crazy. I only wish I could think of such a creative story such as yours, I love the idea of it all. Can't wait until you update, but don't rush yourself. Cheerio. Tay
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 13:06 CST
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Amazing! I loved the new chapter, although you double-posted it, and now there are 2 of the same chapters posted. Wow.. I am so shocked at how well written this story it, and the plot is amazing. I seriously can't wait to find out what happens next, so PLEASE update again soon?
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Reviewed By: modra On: November 03, 2004 19:19 CST
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wow... i found this story just yesterday, and finished reading what you have so far and i absolutely love it! the plot itself is really original (something you don't see too often in the world of fanfic, unfortunately) and the characters are totally deep and believable. i really hope you continue this story, because i'd love to find out what happens next, especially how the relationship between inu and kag will develop. though i understand the time/school factor all too well, i do hope that you update soon... have you thought about maybe posting this on aff.net? you might find more readers that way. anyway, great job, really hope to read more!
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 10:09 CDT
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You have no idea how much I love this story so far. It's seriously one of the best stories I've read here so far. I say that a lot when I review, but this time I seriously mean it! Hmm.. I have no idea if Kagome is human or demon or half or something else.. you keep me guessing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love reading it so much! Please don't stop writing this fic, it has an amazing plot and you are just such an excellent writer. The way you word everything is fantastic! And NO grammar or spelling mistakes. You must be inhuman to write something this great! I love it! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Interested Observer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, it's so good. I'm a little confused about the whole Kagome thing right now but I suppose it is supposed to be a mystery until the next chapter, isn't it. I really enjoy the way it's written, your style is unique and interesting. I'm really looking forward to your next update. - April
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: October 22, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Did Kagome really turn into a demon? Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: mentallydisturbed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. You are a very talented writer! I love the way to write it and this story is one of my absolute favorites on this site! Please update as soon as you can, because I look forward to it. Peace Tai
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