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 Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net  On: May 08, 2006 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow
 Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi*  On: May 05, 2006 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You may want to work on the format of the last chapter you posted though. I'm sure you didn't mean for it to come out like that. And I think it is a great idea that you waiting on the lemon between Inu and Kag. It will seem more believable down the road then just a quick rump now. Anywho, nice story. I can't wait to see more :)
 Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2006 16:40 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really great story and I'm dying to know what happens next! Please Update Soon!
 Reviewed By: Knight_Two  On: March 07, 2005 10:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good fic, I'm waiting to see next chapter.
 Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (sorry too lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
so is kagome a demon now? i hope you updat soon, cuz i really wanna know.
 Reviewed By: Josie D. [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! It's like once you start reading it, you can stop. You have an amazing talent and I love the characters! Please update soon...oh, and, even if it's business, I don't really like the idea of a Kira/Inu lemon. Please update soon and continue the amazing work!
 Reviewed By: Ryu Taiyouki  On: January 25, 2005 00:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am of the mind set that i'd rather hear the citisims brfore the applause but in this story i can only find technical critisim which are a good authors right to keep. I was very impressed at your endurance as long chapters are difficult to keep going especially as the story is beggining but you manage to keep very high action and lots of material flowing. i found the almost William Gibson style to be quite intriguing. I would like to hear more about the scenes, the demon club interior would have been interesting. I wonder what sort of decor they would use, and the descriptions of charecters especally the clothing they wear normally. i hope you continue to enjoy writing as i will continue to enjoy reading
 Reviewed By: Ikiwi (not logged in)  On: January 25, 2005 00:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Oh thank God you updated! This story is so amazing.. the plot is excellent and the way you word everything is so great. I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work and update ASAP!
 Reviewed By: maleng  On: January 24, 2005 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
very interesting indeed... the whole turning something into a different species... very original... and with kira and inuyasha sharing a bed whoooo.... now that is crazy.. well i wait for the next installment
 Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2005 03:45 CST
Comment/Review:
You finally updated!! And it was an awesome chapter!! This has such a great plot line to it, I'm totally wrapped up in the story. I'll be waiting for you next chapter!!
 Title: just some guy
Reviewed By: sweetinbullits  On: December 08, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
good story,I've read of kag turning demon before but never that way...intresting. anyway update soon. p.s. where's the sex
 Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2004 10:30 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is awesome! Please update soon. I really like it!
 Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2004 03:52 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, baby! This story HAS to be one of my favorites now! You're whole twist on the Inu gang is absolutely fabulous! You must have a creative streak a mile wide. Hey, but do me a favor... UPDATE ASAP!! I can't wait to find out what Kag is and what Inu is going to do about it!! GREAT story!!
 Reviewed By: mentallydisturbed [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2004 21:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm always so surprised after I read a chapter of this extrodinary story. Chapter after chapter I can barely wait until an update. Your story is one of the best I've ever seen, and I can tell you that it is one of my favorites. You've got a very creative mind and I thought the way you described the scene when Inuyasha and Kouga were fighting, and Kagome had turned all 'demon' on them. Simply splendid. Keep up the good work, and don't rush yourself. You've got a great story working for yourself here, and if you ever abandon this idea, then my god you'd have to be crazy. I only wish I could think of such a creative story such as yours, I love the idea of it all. Can't wait until you update, but don't rush yourself. Cheerio. Tay
 Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2004 13:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Amazing! I loved the new chapter, although you double-posted it, and now there are 2 of the same chapters posted. Wow.. I am so shocked at how well written this story it, and the plot is amazing. I seriously can't wait to find out what happens next, so PLEASE update again soon?
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