| "Short Flings" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: More Asuka
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I've got a contraceptive implant, see?" She put her forearm in front of his face and he noticed a little bump, as if something were under the skin. "The doctor said it would help…stabilize…my monthly mood swings." You mean, during the entire series, all Asuka needed was a little implant so she could do the horizontal mamba and she would have wound up like the wonderful girl Shinji got to play with in this fic? Man, that would have turned the whole thing around :) Haven't gotten to chap 2 yet, but in case you havent considered it yet, and I think I might have mentioned it in a review for one of your other EVA fics, but I'd love to have Asuka scream in German, epithets, anything, during her "moment of ecstasy". Part of Tiffany Grant's appeal (to me) as the dub v/a was that she could go from English to German at the drop of a hat, and after that, I'd always wondered what Asuka would say and how she'd say it... Anyway, love this, and thanks for the announcement of my update on your live journal! Ciao! W.
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: Kargan303 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was most entertaining, keep up the good work because I like to see what you throw in next.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, hope to more of this one soon.
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Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the better PWP fics I've read. Excellent job! The Reanimated Raynor
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Reviewed By: unholy_blaze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm supprised. This is one of the few good "hentai" fanfics I hace read in a long time. Good work!
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Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! ~Raven
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Reviewed By: dfggfd On: August 18, 2004 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Are you going to write more?
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