| "Loss of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you type it twice..? Whatever... I was just lettin' you know that you typed:WARNING YAOI on the summary.. and this was only a lime... yeah. It was pretty good, I'm expecting a next chapter.. I'm waiting for 'when he's older' too!
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 13:56 CST
Comment/Review:
dude...why'd you write it twice? O_o...good nonetheless...
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Reviewed By: kageko On: August 21, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a wicked story, i hope that u can find a way to continue it.
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