| "Love and War" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Akaihane On: August 19, 2004 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really think you need to work on your grammar. Did you check this before you posted it? It really lowest the enjoyment of the fic. And the lemon...one minute she wants him to hurt her, the next she doesn't?
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that you update it again soon. This was really fun to read and I can't wait to see teh aftermath of this and what is going to happen between them in public @ school etc. Hope that you can update it soon.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that you update it again soon. This was really fun to read and I can't wait to see teh aftermath of this and what is going to happen between them in public @ school etc. Hope that you can update it soon.
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter I really enjoy reading this story. I hope that you keep writing, and I can't wait until the next chapter of this story.
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