| "Send Me An Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: intense
Reviewed By: Lina A Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that was very intense. Now I have to read the next one. Great job, Happy Halloween! Until then, ja! ~rose-chan
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Title: Sincerely...
Reviewed By: Chocolate Marshmallow Boi On: August 01, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I see some cliches, you still picture the scenes vague.. so sometimes you can't imagine quickly what would it look like... But I guess u want dat mysterious feel? Yeah, and then you didin't put much detail. I think one horny way to boost up the spirit of the lemon is to exaggerate it... hehe.. that's what i like... sweaty, hot smut. bwahahahaha Besides that, its an oh-okay-that's-a-good-one type of story :)
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Reviewed By: box.it On: July 13, 2005 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting concept you've got there with the guardian angel and all. simply love it!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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