| "Change of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It isn't bad! You should see some of my first fics...thankfully they've improved a little. They are so cute together! It's a cool story, but it really did happen kinda fast, didn't it? *Off to read your other stories*
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Title: Lovin' It!
Reviewed By: yaoishoujo On: October 27, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do I really need to explain my ratings?! They really speak for themselves! That was a great story and you wrote it so well, that I should really be kneeling in defeat. You write way better than I do! I envy you! Ryou's dad was surprisingly calm and collected to hear that his son was gay! Well, this is a fictional story, so that's to be expected. Anyhoo, I think I've written plenty, os keep up the yaoi goodness. Hh, and for those other reviewers who asked, aishiteru means "I love you" in Japanese. It's the highest form of love, too! People only say it if they're really in love with the other person. Hope that helps! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that pairing. Went a little fast, but that`s okay. You should right more for this one.
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 08:37 CDT
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what does Aishiteru mean?
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Reviewed By: .... On: September 26, 2004 21:22 CDT
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what does Aishiteru mean?
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Title: mre
Reviewed By: um....clueless On: September 23, 2004 18:51 CDT
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umm cool story!
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 17:20 CDT
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Rushed... I don't like rushed. But it was cute nonetheless.
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Title: s
Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww i like this story!it cute!update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 85474723 On: September 10, 2004 22:06 CDT
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great story!! its soo good update soon!
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Title: mreee
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:43 CDT
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Lol.. didn't expect the thing with Ryou's dad. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. Hmm, I seem to have an urge for chocolate all of a sudden..
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Title: aroo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.. that was so sweet ^^ Is there more? Cause, I like.. wanna see what's gonna happen. XD Update soon!
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