| "Open Eyes: Sequel to Lightening Assassin" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read both stories first and they were great. There was some grmmar mistakes but other than that i liked them very much. I feel bad for Ryu will you write a story for him or let me i LOVE his character
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Title: Love Your Story!
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 30, 2005 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read the story for the first time and I think that this story has lots of potential. I also seeing Rin being pregnant with twins with different fathters. Now that will be a story. How will that relationship survive that. Can Rin even survive having two different half demon children??? Story here. Update soon.
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: cherry_pillows_made_of_clouds On: May 30, 2005 07:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's a very cute fic but the japanese words are VERY annoying. it's nice you know so many japanese words but a alot of people who just start don't know them. and even if you do know them it's really anoyying. so plaees keep it at simple words and not full lines .... just keep it english or make it fully japanese 'cause this is very annoying when your reading! but i really like your fic ever so cute ^^ don't get me wrong this is no flame i luv your fic!
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Reviewed By: Starilight_Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, Love how your twisting her heart around. Beautiful plot please do continue...
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Reviewed By: Gemini Dragonstone On: November 13, 2004 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as you can ^_^ Loved the theatrics with Rin and Ryu! Though if we can vote for a pairing, I am for Ryu, loved him as a character! Gemini
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story!! hey could you possibly translate all those japanese blurbs like at the bottom or sumthin? yeah im slow if they are obvious in what they are sayin...but THNKZ!! excellent story!! hehe ^_^
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Title: I LOVE it!
Reviewed By: Sesshy/Rin Fan On: August 26, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this first chapter! Please update ASAP!
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