| "Naruto is BACK!!" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Immortalninja009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 15:39 CDT
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I can imagine Naruto looking hot like that. *blushes* I wonder what Sasuke would look like? *imagines* Anyway it was GREAT!
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Reviewed By: honey sue On: July 23, 2005 07:23 CDT
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Auw....please contiune it!!!...please please.... i just love it!
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Reviewed By: kataru_dead On: July 22, 2005 10:50 CDT
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ahhh, i know this waas posted some 2 days ago but, pls. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kataru_0 On: July 22, 2005 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmmm... you're style changed. but it's more humorous now... I like how they talk shit about themselves. it may look like you're not in mood to write, but, the humour makes the story good. very nice! XD
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Reviewed By: kataru_1 On: July 22, 2005 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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daaaaaamn! why in the hell, that I only found your fic just now? this is NARUSASU dammit! and ive been damned dying looking for THIS! ... I really like the part then the UCHIHA SASUKE cried for the first time... XD like it!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 17:00 CDT
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oi is this ever a case of the crossed circuits! Please update soon... I like it a lot
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Reviewed By: BeeBeez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 12:09 CDT
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wow i lvoe this story *thumbs up* but the last chapter was really weird - it was all in one paragraph and REALLY confusing to read! hope you up date soon :P
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Reviewed By: Nasis On: July 09, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story, I'm loving it! But for the love of god...break that last chapter up some.
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Reviewed By: Choi-sama On: July 09, 2005 14:41 CDT
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Oh, whoops. Sorry about that! ^^;
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Title: Dude
Reviewed By: Choi-sama On: July 09, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, well... What's with the "Reveiw or no updates" thing? Isn't that against site policy? And, maybe it's my computer, but what happened to chapter 5? It's like one huge block of English... No way I'm gonna try and read that! O__O" Also, it might help if you made "sensie" "sensei" and "Iruka-kun" "Iruka-sensie/sensei." You know, know that I think of it, maybe I could edit this for you? I know they call it "beta-ing" or whatever, but I'm not sure what that's supposed to be exactly... Anyway, email me if you're interested. CH0iST3R @ hotmail
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Title: Dude
Reviewed By: Choi-sama On: July 09, 2005 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, well... What's with the "Reveiw or no updates" thing? Isn't that against site policy? And, maybe it's my computer, but what happened to chapter 5? It's like one huge block of English... No way I'm gonna try and read that! O__O" Also, it might help if you made "sensie" "sensei" and "Iruka-kun" "Iruka-sensie/sensei." You know, know that I think of it, maybe I could edit this for you? I know they call it "beta-ing" or whatever, but I'm not sure what that's supposed to be exactly... Anyway, email me if you're interested. CH0iST3R @ hotmail
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Reviewed By: Yukiyami On: March 29, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sasuke that fool! He should run after Naruto and stalk him and let the blonde have his way with him.
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Reviewed By: aukai On: March 28, 2005 23:51 CST
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please please please! write more soon! it just getting good. narusauk fanfics rule! get lost hinata! please write more soon!
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Reviewed By: unknown221 On: March 16, 2005 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really interesting fic you should continue it it sounds like it would turn out to be really funny and maybe a little sad good luck writing
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Title: KEWL
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, hunky naruto. ooooo. sasukes jealous. hehehe update soon. (i no crappy review eh)
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