| "Reason to Live" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story. when my friend saw it she started crying, well wht does "Bakura!!! Onegai! Onegai yameru! Yameru onegai! Iie! Iie! Yameru! Bakura" mean?
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Reviewed By: author 9586398 On: October 11, 2004 17:07 CDT
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I don't know how else to tell you this except to advise you to read the chapter summary...it's a revised version of the 1st chapter and I'm planning to revise all the rest as well. ~ Orange
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmm... hey! this story is really good but i just wanted 2 tell u that instead of adding the next chapter, u added the 1st chapter, ok? anyway, im really lookin forward to the next chapter so i hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 10:39 CDT
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please update! I love this fic and it hasn't been updated in ages. *does hikari eyes*
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 10:31 CDT
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Okay, this is very good. Maybe Joey`s accent could be a little thicker. Some don`t match the others. Bakura is doing a lot of hard thinking in this. I like how you showed bits of his past without doing a whole lot of detail, it lets us, readers have a little more imagination on how his life was. Thanks for writing this. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: 0455096 On: August 20, 2004 23:53 CDT
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I think...I'm to cry. That was so sweet. Ryou has always been my favorite character and... this is like a dream come true for me. Keep up the great work :)
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this is really...perfect! *gets on knees* please update as often as you can
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! this is soooooooooooo AMAZING!!! its sooooooooo cool!!! i cant wait untill he becomes nicer towards ryou!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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