| "Paradise City" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 00:03 CDT
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great chapter!!! does Malik live there too? how does Ryou react to the place after meeting Marik and Yami? update more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sesshyandbakurasgirl On: November 21, 2004 19:30 CST
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i love it. please u have to update soon. i cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel kind of bad reviewing now, when I know it hasn't gone far enough for me to make any real judgements. I like the idea, though. No offense intended, but many of your sentances are a bit runnon-ish and lacking in commas. Otherwise, I love it! I'm just a little confused...even if Bakura wasn't dead, isn't he an adult? (He'd still be hot even if he was old...) I guess I'll find out. I can't wait for your next update! This is a very good story.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 20:02 CST
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Well...that was an akward scene....o_o; Imagine..living with those perverts!?
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 21:43 CDT
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Ah! I just found this and you can't stop there! I was getting so into it!! Pretty please update soon, I so can't wait for the chapters to come!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (I don't remember logging out!) On: October 28, 2004 17:48 CDT
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Wow... I think I felt how uncomfortable Ryou was! That poor boy is too shy for his own good... I think he needs to make friends fast so that he can come out of his little shell! Please update soon! Oh, as to the other chapters? I thought they were all good, including this one. I don't think any changes are needed.
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:34 CDT
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[Hearts in eyes] SUGOI~! Annother great chapter! Ryou will be getting out of the shower...and they'll see him in a small towel ONLY!? ;_;/ I wish that was the scenario...
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 16:53 CDT
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Wow, what a neat concept for this story, I love it! I hope you update soon, I can't wait for Ryou to be introduced to the 'Perverted Freaks' as you called them! lol
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 16:19 CDT
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I so want to know what is going to happen. update please, hope this makes you feel guilty so that you keep up with the story.
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: BlueMonkeyCrossing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:37 CDT
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[O.o]Whoaha! I've been looking for this story for like...ever! After looking more though I have found it! And I give you an 'I hate Anzu' plushie.[Hands you a plushie with Anzu and a knife going through her head & a lot of blood] I like your fic,and hope you update soon. Buh-Bye~!
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 18:04 CDT
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I want to know if Malik comes to the orphnage because his grandpa dies and then he meets up with Ryou and fall back into love. That would be cool. Well, update soon. Bakura: Why is Ryou in love with Malik? Because he is!
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Title: aka DMG/H
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 22:13 CDT
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It doesn't matter if it's a filler ch. it's still a good ch. ^_^ The dream/memory was sort of intriguing. Ud when u can. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 20:40 CDT
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[Giggles] Yami and Marik~! Wohaaaa~! Update again soon, ya hear?
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Title: Huza!
Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! New chapter! I was waiting for this, lot's of angsty thoughts but good nonetheless, shows you put thought into your writing and it's not just meaningless dribble, i hope to see more soon! Keep it up! Hmmm...who should MArik be with, i'm not really sure but i think Otogi he's seems a little more Marik's type, with Seto i think it would get a little too competitive i should know i have a fic with Marik and Seto and making one submissive it kinda strange since they are both so strong willed, anywya good luck! I hope you continue soon!
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Reviewed By: xxx_Maliks_love_xxx On: August 27, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MEEP! Me love your rp! And to answer your question...He could be with Yami. Or Honda. Or Yugi. Anyways...please update as soon as possible! Your adorng fan, Yve a.k.a xxx_Maliks_love_xxx
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 14:13 CDT
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how does he take to his housemate? update soon!
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Title: aka DMG/H on ff.net
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress not logged in On: August 19, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story u have here! I love it so far. ^_^ Sounds very intriguing. hehe. I wonder what's going to happen next. It's kinda unusual for me to find this on mm.org before I find it on ff.net. *surprised look* Unless u don't have this on ff.net. Well hope u ud soon. See ya around. ^_~
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooooooooo this is soooooooooo good!!! it doesnt suck at all!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 18:10 CDT
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It didn't suck. I know because mine sucks. My story is Trouble Ahead. If you ever get the chance to read it. update soon and please don't leave anything out.
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