| "A Stranger's Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Marilyn On: July 18, 2005 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was recommended by the DBZ Fanficn Salon and it didn't diappoint. Thanks so much for providing a thorough, daring, and adventerous romp into Bulma and Vegeta's private sex life. I never figured it would be ordinary by any stretch of the imagintion but you managed to go far further then I could ever dare to go. I really enjoyed this. Thanks so much!!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Darkngel2379 On: June 27, 2005 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Write More!!! I loved it.
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Reviewed By: anja On: May 28, 2005 14:50 EDT
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Ooh I loved it. It was soo sweet! Please write more! I just love those two together... *Sighes*
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Title: Naughty and Wicked.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: May 18, 2005 22:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot. Sexy. Delicious. Yummy. So you've heard the saying about "good girls" to, hmmm? Heh. I know from personal experience this rings true. *winks* Great Job! Bura
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 18:37 EDT
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*Twitch* I... I didn't know there was a 2nd part to this - I only read the first one when I reviewed - O.o (Don't judge me!! After that it was a damned miracle I could thing straight to review!!) And holy hfil what a 2nd part it was!! :D Dang, it's like you looked into my mind and found one of my favourite fantasies... a nekkid Bardock all bound and helpless while I... *looks around*... rescue him and send him on his way... O.o What else would a woman do faced with a naked restrained saiyan? *bats eyelashes* Excellent, excellent fic - so hot, so very, very hot... Now I must go... Copying and pasting to do (again!! :D ) Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!! *bows down before lemon goddess*
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...*fans self*...now THAT was hot...I need some water, a ciggie, and a man like that...
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 02, 2005 02:12 EST
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i actually felt touched (along with other ahem feelings), please continue the story?? i want to see them together, finally finally together
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 07:54 EST
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Dang that was hot!! Hold on... Yamcha used to be my bishie before I saw Bardock... *Copy, paste. 'Find'. Bulma. 'Replace all. 'Barbara'. 'Find'. Vegeta. 'Replace all'. Bardock... :D :D :D* You know you had me feeling sorry for him when Bulma said 'Please let me go' and he misinterpreted it... STOP IT!! :(( Must not feel sorry for TB... Oh - hold off giving birth to that baby for as long as you can, and give us more fics like this before motherhood drudgery takes over from pregnancy hormones... :D
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Reviewed By: fangirl88 On: November 28, 2004 20:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a little embarrassing writing this review *sniff sniff, smells like immaturity* owell I just had to write this review because this 'lemon' (whatever you call these things) is just so above the bar! I mean it was just...wow... I'm sure that's sounds really perverted but I mean your writing and everything is just great!!
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: November 18, 2004 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was awesome. i especially liked the first one. it made me wet haha
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 10:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl need i say more this was just to fucking hot man you just... just...FUCKING ROCK.
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Reviewed By: 6846+14 On: October 25, 2004 13:43 EDT
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Now we all know you're a demon in the sack
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: October 01, 2004 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... WOW.....
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 08:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa mama. I don't know how you do it, but you continue to blow me away with your lemons. Also, the insecurities you portrayed was not a shame. It just added another layer of well-writen drama. Great job!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:46 EDT
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Oh no, the insecurities made it hotter! Nothing like a little weakness to really make things raw. Excellent!
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