| "A Stranger's Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: A Stranger's Kiss"
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 22, 2004 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know as i sit here and read this story with SADE playing "it's never good as the first time" makes me wonder...i how i hope that you continue this story for as long as you want to...please..i wish i had that much intensity sex with my mate...:( great job !!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: la la On: September 18, 2004 17:53 EDT
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whoa that was intense on the serious level. me personally would have been a little stronger if i were bulma, but she held out as long as she could. that was a good story.
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Reviewed By: Hyperactive Chihuahua On: September 08, 2004 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, where's my after-sex-cigarette? I definitely need one now! That was one of the best B/V-Lemons I have ever read! Not just the usual in-out-ready + some foreplay thingie! YAY!
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: September 04, 2004 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...that turned me on...O_O
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It's been a long, long time since I've been so breathless over a B/V lemon. Amazing. Without a doubt, the BEST B/V one-shot lemon I've ever had the pleasure of drooling over. BTW-Congrats on the bouncing baby!
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Title: ok, I just fell off my chair...
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*scrambles herself back on the chair...* Ehehehehe...Hot damn! woooohhhh! hurt meehh, hurt meeeh, this was so incredibly hot! Loved it!!!! I read that you were pregnant? Congratulations, I hope you have a healthy baby! ^__^ A big admirer of you work, Blue Dragon.
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Reviewed By: me On: August 20, 2004 23:57 EDT
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holy shit, i think that was one of the best damn lemons that i have EVER read!!!! wooo damn, that was some steamy hot shit right there. jesus, mary and joseph....wow.....i think that i might need after sex food from just reading that! LMAO!!!!
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Title: yippee!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 20:01 EDT
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That was enormous fun--a very original "first time" for our favorite couple, eh? Let's hear it for progesterone and for frank talk in nasty fics! I used the word "cock" shamelessly in my first full-blown lemon, and I'm tired of all the romance novel sex B & V have been having in fanfiction, so yes, cheers! A marvelous wicked bit of lemony goodness! You're a wonderful B/V writer!!! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: August 20, 2004 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK seriously… this is the best lemon I've ever read !(Any chance of a sequel *wink*)…
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 09:25 EDT
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WooHoo!! loved it! **fanning self**
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Reviewed By: nona On: August 20, 2004 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn! Best B/V one shot ever!
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Title: Phew!
Reviewed By: Mz D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hot lemon! Gotta say your pregnancy is making you write your best stuff yet. Gotta love those hormones! (Even the bad stuff that comes with it as well.)
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Title: *feels a bit TO hot*
Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! loved it ... wow... hehe. Best oneshot I've ever read lol. Awesome!
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Title: A Stranger's Kiss"
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 19, 2004 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED A COLD SHOWER NOW.THANK YOU FOR THAT!!!!! VERY NICE ONE-SHOT..WRITE MORE OF THEM..AND YES I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT BEING HORNY...LOL...
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Title: Pretty awesome as always!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:05 EDT
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Very nice one-shot!! I'm so used to you doing multi chapter stories that this quickie was just perfect!! B/V are my favorite pairing and you did a great job in portraying their first time together!! *screw Yamacha!* And I can totally see Bulma enjoying the whole 'bad girl' thing in bed. Great job and remember Breyer's Ice Cream is all natural and is the perfect remedy to all pregnancy troubles!! *wink*
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