| "A Stranger's Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...*fans self*...now THAT was hot...I need some water, a ciggie, and a man like that...
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 02, 2005 02:12 EST
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i actually felt touched (along with other ahem feelings), please continue the story?? i want to see them together, finally finally together
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 07:54 EST
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Dang that was hot!! Hold on... Yamcha used to be my bishie before I saw Bardock... *Copy, paste. 'Find'. Bulma. 'Replace all. 'Barbara'. 'Find'. Vegeta. 'Replace all'. Bardock... :D :D :D* You know you had me feeling sorry for him when Bulma said 'Please let me go' and he misinterpreted it... STOP IT!! :(( Must not feel sorry for TB... Oh - hold off giving birth to that baby for as long as you can, and give us more fics like this before motherhood drudgery takes over from pregnancy hormones... :D
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Reviewed By: fangirl88 On: November 28, 2004 20:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a little embarrassing writing this review *sniff sniff, smells like immaturity* owell I just had to write this review because this 'lemon' (whatever you call these things) is just so above the bar! I mean it was just...wow... I'm sure that's sounds really perverted but I mean your writing and everything is just great!!
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: November 18, 2004 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was awesome. i especially liked the first one. it made me wet haha
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 10:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl need i say more this was just to fucking hot man you just... just...FUCKING ROCK.
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Reviewed By: 6846+14 On: October 25, 2004 13:43 EDT
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Now we all know you're a demon in the sack
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: October 01, 2004 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... WOW.....
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 08:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa mama. I don't know how you do it, but you continue to blow me away with your lemons. Also, the insecurities you portrayed was not a shame. It just added another layer of well-writen drama. Great job!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:46 EDT
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Oh no, the insecurities made it hotter! Nothing like a little weakness to really make things raw. Excellent!
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Title: A Stranger's Kiss"
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 22, 2004 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know as i sit here and read this story with SADE playing "it's never good as the first time" makes me wonder...i how i hope that you continue this story for as long as you want to...please..i wish i had that much intensity sex with my mate...:( great job !!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: la la On: September 18, 2004 17:53 EDT
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whoa that was intense on the serious level. me personally would have been a little stronger if i were bulma, but she held out as long as she could. that was a good story.
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Reviewed By: Hyperactive Chihuahua On: September 08, 2004 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, where's my after-sex-cigarette? I definitely need one now! That was one of the best B/V-Lemons I have ever read! Not just the usual in-out-ready + some foreplay thingie! YAY!
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: September 04, 2004 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...that turned me on...O_O
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It's been a long, long time since I've been so breathless over a B/V lemon. Amazing. Without a doubt, the BEST B/V one-shot lemon I've ever had the pleasure of drooling over. BTW-Congrats on the bouncing baby!
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