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| "Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 04:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I know you wrote this about five years ago, but I hope you still check the reviews for this story. I was kind of dissapointed that you didn't show what happened with the future Heero and Duo. For instance, did Duo still die, or after the war where did they go to? Did they still buy the house with the hill on L2, or did they move to Earth, or somewhere else? Did they keep intouch with the other piolets over the 5 years that had passed in the origional story? In other words, did some of the stuff in the first story also change because of what Heero had done. Other than that it was a very good story, as was the prequel to this. (Which by the way had me sobbing like a little baby, thank you very much for that.) But I hope you continue to write.
| Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
ok so you posted it 1.5 years ago. I am still kind of hoping you come back and check to see if anyone has read it every once in a while.
While the prequel had a few glaring gramatical errors, it was still a read that had me crying in the end.
I wish you had dragged this one out a little more somehow hehe, but as it is it was an excellent story and told well. Your writing style improved from the first one to this one.
Keep up the good work.
~Arith |
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