| "Unconditional Bonds (revamped)" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice. This was a new twist in that relationship. I liked how you got the characters together and the relationships with everyone are clearly defined. Nice work.
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Title: Unexpectedly hot
Reviewed By: bdegrees [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, when I saw who the couple was, I almost laughed and not read. But, this story is so captivating, I read it all in one sitting. Poor Vegeta! I love Bulma, but she totally pissed me off in this one! I feel Goku didn't get a fair deal though, I think he would have seen that what Bulma did was wrong. But, all in all in is a really good story and I can't wait to read more. Oh, and the Lemon was super hot. That's a bonus! :)
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Reviewed By: LadyNamek On: September 02, 2005 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fanfic is excellent! Nice work^^ The style of writing was really professional I think and everything else is great too.Hmmmmmmmmm finally a fanfic with my two favourites! I think the part about the Namek race preveously having girls was fantastic....please continue with it!
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Reviewed By: Toni YeYo On: August 16, 2005 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story u should read purple socks for elise that shit is hot .. poor vegeta
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Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey.... that was very unique pics. Vejiita and Piccolo... hehe. NIcely done... write more@
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Reviewed By: dbz28 On: August 24, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lOVE THIS!!!! Please continue! I've never read the first version of this but I am looking forward to future chapters!!!! Do you have a mailing list?
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
my! Well, that was my first Piccolo yaoi fic! I have to admit the thought made me squirm, but after reading the quality of writing in your religious orgy fic :-) I figured I'd go for it--after all, I'm usually game for anything with a naked Vegeta! I couldn't stop reading! Well done...and I especially appreciate the details about Namekian life from Nail. The humor between the pair seemed right--only the Alanis Morrisette comment and the Boy George one struck me as "off" but I did like this story, much more than I expected to.... I am fond of Piccolo in general and was pleased you kept him IC and didn't humiliate him as I'd feared. Anyway, I'll keep checking back! debbiechan
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