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Title: Naraku
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find your portrayal of Naraku to be interesting. Someone that is being pulled in a hundred directions and has no one to depend upon but himself. It's very unique. Most make him a mindless killer/rapist. I'm glad you are being creative and different. Keep it up.
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Title: Yayness! Sesshoumaru's there too!
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the second chapter! You are very good at keeping them all in character, and now I'm eager to get onto the next one to see what's happening with Kagome!
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Kag/Nar fics. And Kag/Sess...those are the only pairings I've done so far. Anyway, I just read the first chapter and I liked it! I agree with you about Inu and his love for Kagome, but his guilt and memories of Kikyo! Keep up the great work. I'm onto the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic story this is turning out to be. I absolutely love your writing style. I want you to check out this fic: Kilala81 is the writer and the fic is "Sleeping with the Enemy". It is on mediaminer as well. She is an awesome writer, I highly recommend all of her work. I also let her know about your fic, she will be reading it too! Love your work, you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read chapter 3 and it is WOW! I love it! There is nothing wrong with having Naraku love Kagome. Good grief, this IS a fanfic the last time I looked, right? If people want the true form, than they need to just watch the shows and NEVER read a fanfic, cause they are meant to be different. Otherwise I do believe it would be pointless and boring to read, right? Anyway, I love this fic and cannot wait to see what all happens with Kagome, Sesshoumaru and Naraku!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read chapter 2, and its just as good as the first! Talk about wow, I cannot wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I absolutely love this chapter! I have just read the first chapter, and it is so awesome! I cannot wait to read each and every chapter!!! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves NarakuxKagome flag* If this pairing is in this fic, I'm all for it. This pairing is so rare and would love to read more. But I hope you continue this story. I'd like to see Naraku and Kagome's relationship grow ^___^
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Reviewed By: Kaggie-poo On: September 04, 2004 20:36 CDT
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WHAT THE *BEEP* IS WRONG WITH YOU!!! I HATE NAROKU HE'S A GAY FAG!!!! WHY WOULD YOU PAIR HIM WITH KAGOME!!!! THATS SOME SCARY *BEEP*!!!
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Reviewed By: Kelly Bean On: September 03, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this fic is very good. You'll rarely read any Naraku fics with an obsession for Kagome, but I've always gotten that underlying feeling from the anime, so it is very unique and I like it. Also...WOW...the pain coming from InuYasha has got to be felt by everyone who reads this fic. I know its a little angsty, but that damned idiot needs to get his priorities straight! Anyways, I hope you write more soon. I'll keep an eye out for your update.
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Reviewed By: Mistic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb! Wonderful! Please do continue with this although a question. Is Naraku going to use Kagome for power or does he have her for another reason? Why would Sesshoumaru want Kagome? Anyways now that that is outta my system. Update soon.Bye!
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Title: very kewl
Reviewed By: kanayekisho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:17 CDT
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that was really good- a little awkward that naraku would be "good" as you are making it out as. i always looked at him as purely evil. i still think he is, which is why im glad thats not the only pairing ^_^ im really mad at inuyasha- even though ive always luved the inu/kag pairings best because it just seems right, im mad at him in this one. he is SO stupid! well, anyway, great job!! i seriously can't wait until you update!! keep it up!! (SOON!!!!! lol)
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Title: GREAT JOB!
Reviewed By: heather ann On: August 25, 2004 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far, keep it comming!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! KEEP IT COMMING, GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: August 20, 2004 07:14 CDT
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I am sooooo glad Inu isn't being that tired out-of character person who suddenly abandons Kagome. I've always pictured him as more of a very young, very confused person with little experience of love. Also, sexy Naraku is a nice fanfiction treat. Enjoyable and bad for you.
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