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Reviewed By: nyuu_nyuu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is ausom. YOU GOT TO UPDATE IT NOW!!! PLEASE! I CANT STAND THE SUSPENCE!!
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: December 08, 2004 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey...Just dropping you a quick line, to ask you to update your fic soon!! We wanna know what's gonna happen next!
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Reviewed By: Kelly Bean On: November 17, 2004 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Not too bad...are you kidding me? It was really good. I felt like my own mouth was parched and needed that drink of water. I think you did a great job of describing Kagome's reaction to waking up with injuries in Naraku's care. I'd say that: "Uh...." would have been a very realistic response, especially when your sworn enemy is actually sounding like he cares about you. Anyways...I definitely can't wait for the next installment, you absolutely MUST update this fic more often. Apparently writer's block can no longer be used as an excuse since this chapter turned out so well ^_^
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Title: Kagura!!
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagura is so positively evil...but in a good way. You understand why she wants Naraku dead, and it's great that she would plot against him. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have most certainly enjoyed reading your fanfic so far. I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next. Your story could take so many turns. Please do not give up on it. You write really well, and it is most certainly too good to stop!
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Title: Naraku
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find your portrayal of Naraku to be interesting. Someone that is being pulled in a hundred directions and has no one to depend upon but himself. It's very unique. Most make him a mindless killer/rapist. I'm glad you are being creative and different. Keep it up.
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Title: Yayness! Sesshoumaru's there too!
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the second chapter! You are very good at keeping them all in character, and now I'm eager to get onto the next one to see what's happening with Kagome!
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: Kirara81/Kilala81 On: October 02, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Kag/Nar fics. And Kag/Sess...those are the only pairings I've done so far. Anyway, I just read the first chapter and I liked it! I agree with you about Inu and his love for Kagome, but his guilt and memories of Kikyo! Keep up the great work. I'm onto the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic story this is turning out to be. I absolutely love your writing style. I want you to check out this fic: Kilala81 is the writer and the fic is "Sleeping with the Enemy". It is on mediaminer as well. She is an awesome writer, I highly recommend all of her work. I also let her know about your fic, she will be reading it too! Love your work, you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read chapter 3 and it is WOW! I love it! There is nothing wrong with having Naraku love Kagome. Good grief, this IS a fanfic the last time I looked, right? If people want the true form, than they need to just watch the shows and NEVER read a fanfic, cause they are meant to be different. Otherwise I do believe it would be pointless and boring to read, right? Anyway, I love this fic and cannot wait to see what all happens with Kagome, Sesshoumaru and Naraku!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read chapter 2, and its just as good as the first! Talk about wow, I cannot wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I absolutely love this chapter! I have just read the first chapter, and it is so awesome! I cannot wait to read each and every chapter!!! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves NarakuxKagome flag* If this pairing is in this fic, I'm all for it. This pairing is so rare and would love to read more. But I hope you continue this story. I'd like to see Naraku and Kagome's relationship grow ^___^
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Reviewed By: Kaggie-poo On: September 04, 2004 20:36 CDT
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WHAT THE *BEEP* IS WRONG WITH YOU!!! I HATE NAROKU HE'S A GAY FAG!!!! WHY WOULD YOU PAIR HIM WITH KAGOME!!!! THATS SOME SCARY *BEEP*!!!
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