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Reviewed By: YaoiCyberCat (FF.net) On: November 28, 2004 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you should call this story, 'Trapped Loves'. Because the two people that Trieze love are trapped. Well anyway, I see that you hadn't updated since October. So, please update soon, real soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good, but whill the chapters get longer? I feel so sorry for heero, he's such a nice guy.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 25, 2004 07:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting.
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: August 20, 2004 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
intresting start - more please
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Reviewed By: SnakeMistress On: August 20, 2004 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* i hope everything works out alright *sniffles* but anyway. this is great and i can't wait for the up date.
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