| "Ties of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Na(drachaeli) On: May 27, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic I hope you continue it soon. Sesshou-Maru should have Rin go to war with him and he should listen to her more. When they're alone she could make some brilliant comment and than Sesshou-Maru would know she was good at thinking on her feet. ~Na
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u writers and your cliffhangers. i hope u update soon so we could read how the intruder will get ripped apart by sessy. i like it when writers add characters of their own in stories. update soon!
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Reviewed By: lena17 On: August 23, 2004 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh, i really like this one. Keep it up, and i can hardly wait to see more chapters!!!!
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: August 22, 2004 01:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
enjoyed the start of your story and glad to read of Rin having a bit of backbone to her.Looks like Sesshoumaru wont be having his own way all the time in this one.
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