Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I've been having problems writing on some of my own fics so I've decided to go through and read and review for those people who have been so kind to R&R mine! So here I am! I like this idea you have, first off. I've read some things similar but not quite the same. I'm interested to see where you take it. I do have to say that it can sometimes be confusing when you try and change POVs within a chapter. Having one chapter in, for example, Kagome's POV and having the next chapter in Inuyasha's POV is a little less confusing and hey you can get more chapters in your story like that and readers love lots of long chapters. You have a lot of potential as a writer, though by no means am I an expert. I'm not even that good at writing to begin with, and I usually hate dispatching advice when I feel that I don't have any room to critize others. Just fill out your story. I know you get excited and want to write everything down and get everything posted but pad out the chapters a bit, put details in. It helps everything seem more 3D. I'm looking forward to seeing you update in the future. Until Next Time...Sfae
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