| "Starlit to Lifes, Curses and Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: March 26, 2005 08:26 CST
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So since Yusuke and Kurma knows what will happen,will they let some of the events happen like the sand/sound invasion of the Leaf and Naruto facing Gaara and Neji and change them like what Naruto did in the anime and the books? What is going on Ranma, and Yusuke/Kurma's world and I would like to see the kid that can cut though dimenisons would his world somehow enter the Naruto world. I would like to see them find something that will allow them to be tempoary in their normal ages maybe for a day or so. I would like to see the Spirt village makes an alliance with Sound and Leaf while secertly trying to kill Orochimaru(death note).
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 03:54 CST
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dude great story first off i would like to say this is a great story and not very many stories put ranma recca and yusuke all in the naruto world, in fact this may be a first. now i have read at least close to a thousand stories and this is well written. keep going its a work of art in the making. here are a couple ideas if you need them, have lost boy pop up a little, come on he is bound to cross dimensions at least some times. let the gang find some ancient buried scrolls detailing jutsus lost for hundreds of years. have some ninja from the leaf find naruto and hinata in the woods, after the two of them have finished a quick errand, and have them get dragged back to the village ranma and yusuke have to rescue them but find that the two teens are giving the leaf residents a terrible time, naruto going nuts and painting the faces of the hokage and hinata beating her father when he tries to punish her for leaving. and have the pervert find ranma after ranma has finished a simple death wish a couple villages away. hope you enjoy
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Reviewed By: NekoRanma On: February 03, 2005 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
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man you need to work on your grammar just a bit. You seriously need a proof reader. Though you seem to be doing good, if english is your second language
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:22 CST
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: zerotolerance On: November 30, 2004 14:28 CST
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Yo,you haven't e - mailed me in a while.Please e - mail me at zerotolerance1@home.nl
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Reviewed By: lucy826 On: October 18, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is really good! it is very good! well anyways i can't wait till u write the next chapter! and also while they are looking for naruto is jiraiya going to find them?? i hope so!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: white kittty On: October 16, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very good story! i like it! i hope u keep up a good work and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: zerotolerance On: October 08, 2004 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME,THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORY'S I'VE EVER READ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! Are you going to let Naruto join them after he was betrayed by the villages or something similar,or do you have something else in mind.E - mail me if you ever want any ideas or suggestions, Zerotolerance1@home.nl
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Reviewed By: sadame On: September 08, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ano sa, ano sa, will haku and his mother going with kurama-tachi??? and will you do pairing for this fic or no pairing? if it's a yaoi fic i hope there are pairing, if not yaoi fic no pairing ^^ - The name Kyubi, is it just for fox demon that has nine tails or any fox demon? it's just for the (only) fox demon that nine tails (of naruto) - Is Kyubi in Naruto male or female? his japanese voice actor is a male too so kyuubi is a male.
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