| "Starlit to Lifes, Curses and Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: miksmike On: December 24, 2008 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope to see an update 2009:)
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Title: yoko kurama
Reviewed By: posgjhdvjdzf On: May 01, 2007 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama says "I was a fox, a spirit fox that had gained the powers of a demon over the thousands of years that i had lived." as a spirit fox Kurama only has one tail. No matter how powerful he gets, he will remain a one tail, because he isn't a demon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 02:50 CDT
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Hey, two years since last update is merely late to you? I'd say that's more like you came back to the fic after leaving it behind. Then again, that's just my opinion. Still, you need a beta. BADLY. But the idea is good, just your style of writing sucks ass, no offense. My number one suggestion to you is include more details. Show, do not tell. That's it, later.
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Title: Ages
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 12:58 CDT
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In the second chapter you asked about ages. Ranma: 16 Yusuke: 14-15 Kazuma: Same Kurama: 16 Hiei: Unknown Recca: 13-14
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story although I think it's developing rather slowly.
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Title: !!!UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: SilverShinwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love the way this is done. I also like the storyline, it's cool the way it's going. I mean having Recca, Ranma, Urameshi, and Kurama not only create a new village but act as the teachers of their respective styles is GREAT! Even better that they recruited orphansand unwanted children as well as Naruto, Hinata, and Lee. So all I have to say after that is !!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!i really like your story you know, its actually on my favorites list...hope you update! thank you for your time..^^
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: XximaginexX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has got to be my favorite story out of hundreds! Its really intresting and its different from the usual naruto fan fictions.*sighs*I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you will continue this story PLEASE!PLEASE! If not then I'll cry :( lol anyways please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 03:48 CDT
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great story, the idea of ranma in naruto along with some of the yu yu hakusho gang is great. the way you have written this has made it a great story please write some more.
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Reviewed By: FullMetal Fitz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Wow. Just... wow. I think this is the first or second time I've reviewed someone else, but this is definitely a really awesome fic. Especially if English is your second language, I've heard that it's hard to pick up (I don't know, it was my first language ^_~) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Seven Sin On: July 07, 2005 13:29 CDT
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I have been reading your story for a while now and I love it. This is mmy first time reviewing to anyone on Mediaminer. Keep up the good work. I have a request. When taking the Chuunin Exam can you make Recca wear Kurei's outfit and mask. Cause I can picture it on him. Thank you for your time please continue all your hard work.
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Title: the friend of homeboy
Reviewed By: Chaostic Dude On: June 25, 2005 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great fic btw if Recca is going to be making Madougu the spollers bellow might be usesful flame of recca spoller half of the Madougu where made by the Koku who is the 7th dragon(even theo he was the first to become one)his where made to protect ppl wile the ones made by the other dude where made to kill most of them where a lot alike(ie. Shikigami[paper] and Shikigami[hair])because the two where competing with eachother to see who could make the better Madoku also some of the more powerful ones have there own will(i.e. fuujin, raijin, Hyoma En, Mikoto and Bakuju) end spollers and i'm willing to make a list of all the Madougu from the anime and manga and what they do if you want my email is Chaosticdude@gmail.com
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Title: Starlit to Life,curses and Demons
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: June 14, 2005 22:04 CDT
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There should be a portal or a gate to the realm of the spirt and that is why all of the spirts are drawn to the place. The temple should have scrolls with jitsus on it as well. When will the Akatsuki and Orochimaru(who wants the secerts that the Spirt Village has)is going to make an apperance in this fic? When will see the reapperance of Tsunade and Jiraya?
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Reviewed By: kuroneko17 On: June 14, 2005 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really liked your story and i hope you continue to write. i thought it was really original and diferent, i've never read a fic with these types of crossovers. i hope you update soon.
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Title: Starlit to Lifes Curses and Demons
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: April 29, 2005 23:22 CDT
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Will you give Narturo, Hinata, Lee and others territories of their own? I would like to see Hinata gain the territory of Hagiri's territory of creating marks on the victim's body and she doesn't have to accurate using her family's attacks since her attacks will hit the death marks on the body. Narturo might have a territory due the the Nine Tails sealed into him.
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