| "Demon Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 12:19 CST
Comment/Review:
really good please countinue!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hinote077 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this story is good...can't wait 'till u update!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!! And whats the pairing???????
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Title: Demon Heart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 20, 2004 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: don't listen to RedHerring
Reviewed By: jodi On: October 23, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't listen to RedHerring that person is an ass your story is the best you just have to update sooner and please do it soon i want to know how inuyasha finds out kagome is a demon!!!!!!! so keep on writing and dont let people put you down because they get a kik out of putting other people down so i looking forword to reading the rest. see ya
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all, I will say that I have not read the story. Nor do I intend to. Let me tell you why.////////// First of all, your summary. I will never read a story which has a summary of "Just read it," and neither will many others. You may not come up with a good summary, but a short description of what your story is about will usually suffice. If readers and authors will skill and knowledge are attracted to your story, then you will be more likely to get a review that is helpful and informative.//////////// Which is another reason I will not read your story. Just look at your reviews. Sure, they're positive, but no one has commented on your writing skill, or shown you how to improve. That shows me that authors with taste have not read your story. Do you really want those types of reviews? Are you writing for the ego boost? Or do you want to improve your writing through an outlet that you can enjoy? When you encourage reviews from people who can't even spell, that says a lot, and none of it is positive.////////// And thirdly, your summary isn't even spelt right. You have no capitalization of proper nouns, you missed typing in a letter here and there, and your commas are off. //////////// If you really want people -- people whose opinions have the most value -- to read your stories, you are going to have to put a little more effort into your writing.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 04, 2004 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. Update soon please! ^-^
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Title: DAMN, DAMN, DAMN
Reviewed By: BloodAngel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...that was fucking awesome u have so totally got to update this story as soon as u can. Whats going to happen to Kagome now? Oh and are u going to Torture Kikyo and InuYasha? ::jumps up and down:: please update. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.
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