| "To Stop the Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: Meredith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very nicely written lemon. Normally I expect threesome lemons to be done in such tasteless manners or just horribly written but this lemon was a nice breath of fresh air. It was also very very hot...I might have to go take a cold shower now...But anyways well done ^^. I might have to go check out your other stuff now.
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Reviewed By: David F [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say this is one of the most well written fics I've read in a while. You did a wonder job setting up the mood and the unity of the three. I really like the amount of effort you put into the connection of the three characters. Great work hope to run into more of your stuff.
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