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| "Elite Creatures Unleased or The Idiocy of Creatues and Their Keepers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lord of the DK Hater Club On: November 08, 2004 10:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't like you and I'm going to kill you
| Title: not a bad start ... ... update soon
Reviewed By: WSCompton (straight outta compton) On: November 05, 2004 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm the first person to review. Except for that flamer obviously. Well the first chapter wasn't too bad, x-cept for nasty mental pictures o'course. There's something about your bio that is really, really annoying me: now I have to ask: I read your bio. What the fedge is with this bit? *NOTE: Due to their individuality and my own personal safety the NFA have been removed from this bio! To see their details mail me!* Okkaayyyyyy.... I feel that I REALLY^ need to ask this a) Who/what the fuck is the NFA? b) Personal safety? What the fuck? Really who cares THAT MUCH about your characters! 'I don't want them stolen', now that is a reason I can understand. You mention them but won't put them on? If it was a life-or-death situation you wouldn't mention them AT ALL. Also, how can your personal safety be at risk if you do not put your address anywhere!!! What a load. It looks like a non-subtle attention seeking thing. You know that shit like that never works right? My friend-o'a-friend Kerry & a bunch of other guys n gals used to do crazy shit for attention, usually quite bloody. Well... IT DOESN'T WORK! Being an attention seeking drama queen will push people away! PEOPLE WILL NOT WASTE THEIR TIME ON WORTHLESS NOBODIES - ONLY WORTHLESS NOBODIES WASTE THEIR TIME ON WORTHLESS NOBODIES! CHANGE YOURSELF BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE Well there is that big yellfest. Sorry, I have a baddddd history... But I had to ask anyway I just marked your fic 5 all round
| Reviewed By: FlamingWaldo On: November 03, 2004 02:36 CST
Comment/Review:
lol you suck
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