| "The Path to Love is Paved With Many Obstacles" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it please continue!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! continue?
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Reviewed By: A Fanfic Reader On: August 21, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is hard to follow the dialogue since your formatting is messed up. There are no quotation marks around dialogue and odd sentences or parts of sentences are underlined for some reason. Fix it and you may get more readers.
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