| "Loving a Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 16:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good plot. though it is AIM, id say the use of the AIM language is over the top! =P i hope you could hold on the improper grammar a bit.. but the story was really good.. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Melanie_sanzo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great plz carry on this cul fan fic
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Title: a mistake u made
Reviewed By: being helpful On: January 24, 2005 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to let u know that it should be petite not petit. petit is the masculine way to say small, the girl way to say small is petite and i'm assuming sakura is a girl in ur fic, ^_^
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Title: like your story
Reviewed By: cardcaptorsalltheway On: November 07, 2004 03:41 CST
Comment/Review:
i love your story.cant wait for update.please update SOON.
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Title: whatever u say
Reviewed By: mel_iss_a_weirdo On: August 30, 2004 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
your writing has definitely improved. the descriptions help me better visualize the scene. mais...je ne peux pas comprendre le japonais...et ca me rends frustrée! >.< and the way the IMers spell all the words! just because i'm a spelling freak, i'm going to say that i find the spelling of "frenz" and "dis" very unacceptable!! but i do find this line amusing: "n ur punishment is… TYPE WIT GRAMMAR, lil missy!" =D en generale, ton histoire est bon. voila, c'est ca. à bientot!
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Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not a bad story line keep works like this up!
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