| "Burning Up" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Burning up
Reviewed By: Rapunzel On: August 04, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job on your first 'Lemon'! I'm trying to write mine about those two and well, I just its not coming out how I want it, lol! (Thats sound a bit weird, I know! =P) Anyway, keep up the good work! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms (aka Rapunzel) xxx
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: axelalx On: October 19, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice work. I liked your job on it, but it needs to be longer and have a plot but nice job none the less
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Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice job with this lemon! It turned on better than expected. I word of advice would be that you label this hentai if you choose to do anything more lemony in other fics.
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