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| "Puppet" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Great Writing
Reviewed By: vixey On: January 25, 2005 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was wonderfully written. You expressed Duo's personality really well. The amount of communication wasn't a whole lot, but it's only the prologue, and not a whole lot of talking is to be expected (exept for mine maybe ^_^) Great story and can't wait for the next installment of "Puppet". By the way good luck with college.
| Title: Wonderful piece of prose!
Reviewed By: Rekino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written piece of prose. I thought it was wonderful how you set it out! =] Congratulations on writing a wonderful prologue. I thought that you set out Duo's personality quite well, his actions and thoughts staying through to the anime and manga. Hilde's character was well written as well, she was supportive and neither clingy nor needy. Which is good to see. Howver, the only bit I disliked was the lack of dialogue, but of course this is the prologue. So the lack of communication between the characters is supposedly obvious. But nonetheless, it was great overall. Looking forward to the next chapter =]. And a pat on the back for a great start. *pats on back and free choc chip cookie* ^____^ ~ Rekino
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