| "Who Says Words Can't Hurt?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: not_at_my_computer On: September 21, 2004 13:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty interesting. You kind of confused me in the second chapter I thought for sure Inuyasha would have been human since he was in the first chapter. Anyway good story. um... how come there is some much space at the beginning and end of the chapter have scroll alot to get to the review 'button'. Update soon
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Reviewed By: alimm On: August 22, 2004 02:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok I am a bit confused the first chapter said Inuyasha was human. Then the second chapter his is hanyou and it is still the same night? I am going to finish reading the chapters posted. This does sound interesting but try not to put so much 'space' between the first line and then the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. I remember reading this some where... Anyway, please continue this. ^__^
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