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| "Cross Between Times" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!! update soon please ^_^
| Title: here ya go!
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
here's the review you asked for! well, you could improve the grammar a little, you're missing some punctuation and capatilaztion. And Kaede's name ends with "e" not and "a". I didn't give it a creativity rating because not much has really happened yet for me to base that on. Otherwise it was pretty good so far, so upadte soon. I want to know what happens next! ^_^
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