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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting idea you have going. Defintely funny but there's a few plot holes and your grammar could be better. Don't get me wrong I'd love to see this fic continued. Just some constructive critisism: Nearly all the characters are OOC but not painfully so (trust me I used to do the same thing) try to see some of the scenes more from the characters POV before you write them out. My suggestion is to get a Beta. Hope you keep writing this the storyline is quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 05:52 CDT
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I like the idea it's very interesting, but I find most if not all the characters are OOC. Update soon can't wait.
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 16:29 CST
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hurry and update plz!!!! this story is so cool!!! i luv it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah lol I love this please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:56 CST
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Great work! Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 04:12 CST
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Just found this story -- very interesting! I liked Hiei's initial reaction to her -- got to wonder if his attitude might have been a little better if she hadn't k.o.ed him with her defensive barrier that first time. LOL! Subjugation beads for Hiei, huh? Inuyasha should get some fun out of that. Can't wait to see what Kikyou wants to tell Kagome. Glad that Inuyasha still intends to protect her -- was he actually considering Hiei as a good potential mate for her? Don't think I've seen that done before. Looking forward to some good hiei/kagome interaction! Hope you do update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_ofuda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what inuyasha is wearing is known as the hoari(shirt) and hakama(pant). inuyasha clothing is also made from the cloth of the fire rat. anyway update soon because i like it alot!
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice. I like it! ^_^ please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon! i love hieiand kagome!
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Title: c'mon
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw, c'mon, continue writing, its good!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: March 01, 2005 23:06 CST
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OMG I love this story its great you have got to update it realy soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AWESOME
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 03:20 CST
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that was GREAT...heheh...but man you end w/1 cliffy in chapter 3 just to do it again in chapter 4 that's just WRONG you know that isn't very nice of you nope no it isn't...LOL...I'm guessing that its Hiei...but I could be wrong...but hehehe...I still think its funny that he got knocked out by her and now he's all pissy cause a little girl did it....hahah..t.hat was great thanks:D
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting... i look foreward to your next chapter
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Reviewed By: Sue On: November 16, 2004 14:01 CST
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PLZ add a lemon! I luv Hiei-Kag pairings! A lemon would be HAWT!!!
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