| "If You Came Back from Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: minachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second or third time I've stumbled on your fic and it's about time I comment lol. I like it:) I think maybe it could be broken into two chapters, but otherwise it's good. It warms my heart whenever I see a bonding story. I remember when bonding fiction started.... back in the day.... Good fic.
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Title: The Best!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fic! I like cried in the beginning, and nice lemon! It it possible for you to write a SEQUEL?
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Title: WOOOOO HO HO
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: September 01, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is gr8 1 of the best g/cc this is wot i call a classic orginal thats how i c the real goku and chichi relationship i mean come on goku is a saiyin 2 so u kno he will have the same feelin just like veggie lol and remember wen he was super saiyan and left gohan on the lookout u kno he just wasn't stuffin his face this fic is sensational and u should keep writin
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Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this!!! So emotional! So hot! And such a descriptive bonding scene. And the fact that it wasn't something he did automatically or instinctually, but that she thought it out and wanted it. Very cool. Keep up the good work!
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