| "Heart To Get" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Please Write More...
Reviewed By: Selea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I do believe this is my favorite fanfic. out of the ones on Fanfic.net and MediaMiner. The only problem I have with it is the tenses, they alternate from present to past. My personal opinion would be to write it in past tense. But that's just me. I think my favorite coupling is Tsukasa Elk.... I think the treesom would be just creepy.... 0.0lll But all in all I loved it, so I humblely request that you write more. Arigato. ^^
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Title: This is too good to leave hanging!
Reviewed By: Insanitoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this lemon. I mean, it is NOT often someone even writes a lemon as good as this. Even LESS often, is when someone wites a fan fiction with rape in it, that is GOOD. You have accomplished just that! I was completely taken in by your story! All the characters were in character (except Kite maybe in the first chapter, but that was intentional wasnt it? so dont worry about that!) But i would totally love to see this story finished, i really did enjoy it immensly. Well written, well done!
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Reviewed By: Kixo On: August 28, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first when I read this I was so shocked. I was trembling in fear and it was weird. But then agin it was 3 AM. ^^;; Anyways I la it! Please update in AFF.Net ok?
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ⌐.⌐ On: June 26, 2005 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This reminds me of one of my friends, Audrey, she was writing something exactly like this. It creeped me out, this creeped me out even more. Looks like you beet her to the punch. I hate yaoi so i thought it was horid. Sorry.
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Reviewed By: asukirarocks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good so far but if it isnt tsukasa/elk, everything drops to zero!!
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