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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:49 CDT
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(chapter 3) This is such a sad chapter. Poor King Vegeta, he must really be missing his wife. and poor poor Prince Vegeta, he lost his mother and his father is so harsh on him... wonderful writing. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
(chapter 2) wow, another wonderful chapter. This just keep getting better and better. I wonder what is Trunk thinking? and what is going to happen to Vegeta/Bluma and Goku/Chichi..can't wait to find out. Great development. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter one yeah! A DBZ Yaoi!!! there are never enough DBZ Yaoi around. This is so good. I wonder what is going on between Goten and Trunk. They're one of my favorite couple. ^.^ hmm...and I wonder what's going on with Vegeta... Great beginning! I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Marieka On: October 07, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not used to the rating system I cant judge you on Spelling or Grammer because I have no clue Okay, love reading what you written as always. I dont remember if I reviewed chapter 13 or not and I did tell you the other night some of my thoughts. So you may hear it again ; ) I cant help but use Star Wars comparisons. My fav sc fi of all time. The regeneration tank reminded me of the bacta tank. A vision of things to come, like we didnt know that was going to happen (smirks) chapter 14 Goku's idiot grin (snickers) that isnt there (poor guy) The books again love them and know your going somewhere with them cant wait to see what you do with that. Vegeta is a bit frustrated (snickers) and Goku takes everything in stride. Poor Bra is saved by (the bell) unexpected company. Chapter 15 the storm and a twist. I like twists this one was one I wasnt expecting to see . . . . . . hmmm maybe I shouldnt say so I dont give a spoiler to those who read the reviews before reading the story ; ) Love it, Cant wait to read S'more (huggles) See you soon.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the fathers to meet their sons! And for Vegeta to stop being such a stubborn-ass and mate with Goku already! MORE!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude!!!! i friggin LOVE this fic! you gotta update again soon ^-^ it's so damn cool! hilarious shit when vegeta makes a bit of a fool of himself when in his cycle ;) must have more of that! umm a bit of criticism...the spelling really needs work ^_^U lol but that's all. everything else is kickass! update sooooooon!
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Reviewed By: Haruko On: September 10, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo cool! as ive said not too long ago.. eh ^^; who cares? im still allowed to say it! i rated it 10 to everything, not cause your my friend, but because it deserves that! once again: coool!! update soon, web! [huggle and run off to chat]
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