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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(chapter 11) Another wonderful chapter...clap hands. I love the beginning, the walk is lovely, especaily the waterfall. And Bra is so cute!!!! I hope Eric makes her happy. I hope Adam makes Bra happy, too. Bra is cool, too. I love the tossing. It's nice to have a friend like that who stand up for you! Is Appuru really came to earth, that will be cool.. I'll go and read the next chapter now... I think leaving preview is a cool idea. ^__^ Another great chapter ^__^
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Title: The Forgetten past of Seiyan History
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(chapter 10) wow, another great chapter! So many things happened! I can't believe Vegeta almost got bitten! That was one hell of a fight. Not only you're great at writting feelings and lemon, you rock at writing action, too. I love action. I can't belive Chichi is dead. Now I can't seem to hate her anymore. she was not a nice person, but still, I feel bad about seeing here die. Goten rocks!!! ^__^ YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans:
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Chapter 9) I can't believe it! I'm so mad at Chi chi! and i was at her side, too! How can she do that! That heartless succupine!!! I hope Vegita is safe... Goku can't think straight now and Vegita is 'smelling nice'... O.O But then again, I don't really hope Vegita will be safe....a Vegita/Goku/Bulma threesome will be fun...^__^ Bulma cares about Goku a lot, too. Anyway, don't mind me, I'm just being weird. Blame it to Liev and MammonWolf in the chat room right now.. I LOVE THE GOTEN AND TRUNK LEMON! YOU ROCK. THEY ARE JUST TOO CUTE. LICKING! YES! You Are The Best! YYY Another wonderful chapter. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans:
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Chapter 8) Poor King Vegita. Waking up in a new place, losing all his power, can't even move...only to find out his wife is dead. That is so sad. I will go crazy too if that happened to me. I wonder what role is Pan's teacher gonna play...I have to read faster! You're such a gppd writer. How can you write so many good things so fast? Another wonderful chapter. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Chapter 7) this just keep getting better! i can't blieve Goku is this mad. I feel so bad for him. he seems to be in so much pain. He is such a nice person. It's nice to see his friends being there for Goku. What Chi chi did was really uncall for. And Goten and Trunk! They're awsome! I can't believe Trunk marked Goten! Imagine Trunk bite Goten's neck...^__^ goody!!! Another wonderful chapter! This is cool!
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(chapter 6) wow, this chapter is intense! Everyone come together! I can't believe ChiChi is having an affair! I was feeling sorry for her, too....sigh. Relationships are so hard to predict...hmm...I can't believe Vegita yelled at ChiChi! He really cares for Goku...or it is because he is frustrated because he can't work out in the G.R.? ^__^ Another wonderful chapter, you're the best! I can't wait to see what Goten and Trunk say to each other! YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
(chapter 5) King Vegeat is alive? I wonder why he can't move. This is one great story! I can't wait to read more. I hope I can see what happen to all the characters soon. There are so many things happening. Very good fic! You're a great writer. Update soon. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:50 CDT
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(chapter 4) This fic is getting more and more intense by the chapter. What a mess. I feel bad for Chichi, she seems nice and she does care for Goku. I won't know what to do if I keep getting older than my husband and he is in love with someone else. Another great chpater. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:49 CDT
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(chapter 3) This is such a sad chapter. Poor King Vegeta, he must really be missing his wife. and poor poor Prince Vegeta, he lost his mother and his father is so harsh on him... wonderful writing. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:49 CDT
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(chapter 2) wow, another wonderful chapter. This just keep getting better and better. I wonder what is Trunk thinking? and what is going to happen to Vegeta/Bluma and Goku/Chichi..can't wait to find out. Great development. YYY
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Title: Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans
Reviewed By: YaoiYaoiYeah On: October 11, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter one yeah! A DBZ Yaoi!!! there are never enough DBZ Yaoi around. This is so good. I wonder what is going on between Goten and Trunk. They're one of my favorite couple. ^.^ hmm...and I wonder what's going on with Vegeta... Great beginning! I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Marieka On: October 07, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not used to the rating system I cant judge you on Spelling or Grammer because I have no clue Okay, love reading what you written as always. I dont remember if I reviewed chapter 13 or not and I did tell you the other night some of my thoughts. So you may hear it again ; ) I cant help but use Star Wars comparisons. My fav sc fi of all time. The regeneration tank reminded me of the bacta tank. A vision of things to come, like we didnt know that was going to happen (smirks) chapter 14 Goku's idiot grin (snickers) that isnt there (poor guy) The books again love them and know your going somewhere with them cant wait to see what you do with that. Vegeta is a bit frustrated (snickers) and Goku takes everything in stride. Poor Bra is saved by (the bell) unexpected company. Chapter 15 the storm and a twist. I like twists this one was one I wasnt expecting to see . . . . . . hmmm maybe I shouldnt say so I dont give a spoiler to those who read the reviews before reading the story ; ) Love it, Cant wait to read S'more (huggles) See you soon.
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the fathers to meet their sons! And for Vegeta to stop being such a stubborn-ass and mate with Goku already! MORE!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude!!!! i friggin LOVE this fic! you gotta update again soon ^-^ it's so damn cool! hilarious shit when vegeta makes a bit of a fool of himself when in his cycle ;) must have more of that! umm a bit of criticism...the spelling really needs work ^_^U lol but that's all. everything else is kickass! update sooooooon!
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Reviewed By: Haruko On: September 10, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo cool! as ive said not too long ago.. eh ^^; who cares? im still allowed to say it! i rated it 10 to everything, not cause your my friend, but because it deserves that! once again: coool!! update soon, web! [huggle and run off to chat]
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