| "Shadows of an Innocent Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Numisma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad, but i think you need a beta reader to fix up your typos and misspelled words. and to fix up your grammar , punctuation, and run-on sentences.
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Reviewed By: OO On: October 24, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really cool. I just love the idea, and I hope you update it soon. It has me intrigated. Keep on the good work!!!
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Title: Another Great Fic By YOU!!!!
Reviewed By: Grins On: August 26, 2004 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like... no... I love it!!!!! Truly another master piece made by you!!!!
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