| "Treason's Emotion" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: lunatrick114 ~not signed in On: October 25, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, two comments. 1.) BEST CHAP EVER!!! and 2.) You are a very evil person! Finally getting into the good stuff, and you interrupt them..... AGAIN!! Grr! Oh well, you know I could never really be mad at you, Ikiwi! Lol! I can't get enough of this story! Write more soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shikon_no_tama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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GRRRRRr i hate naraku love the story i COMMAND you to finish it 10/10 ^_^ PLEEEEEEEASE MAKE inui and kagome make up in the next shapter PLEEEEEEEEEEASE
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Title: ooo
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 01:01 CDT
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you know wat it's sad funny and i want to kill kikyou and naraku why cant they just leave my fave couple alone why i ask well keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: Serenity Wintirs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 01:25 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!! Really Good Story.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 15:10 CDT
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Your last chapter has me so depressed! I'm a diehard Inu-Kag fan...and while I feel sorry for Kikyo, she is NOT the real Kikyo. When will Inuyasha realize that any promises he makes to the walking corpse are not being made to the woman he met 50 yrs ago?!? Yes, he owes Kikyo peace....but her soul (most of it at least) has moved on...Inuyasha has been given a chance at TRUE happiness with Kagome...she completes the circle..she accepts him for who Inuyasha is...demon, human, hanyou. Kikyo never did...even when she was alive...her obligation as miko and her views about youkai would only allow her to continue a relationship with Inuyasha if he made a wish to be human. I feel frustrated...your writing is great and it makes the situation that much more realistic...but my poor little heart wants Inu-Kag together...NOT torn apart like this. Sigh...
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 22:12 CDT
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wow... dramatic... I LOVE IT! pleez pleez pleez update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lunatrick On: September 19, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just noticed how often i've reviwed this fic, and u must be getting sick of me by now. Lol. Anyways, I've said it once and i'll say it again.... I LOVE THIS FIC! Please update again soon! ~lunatrick114~
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly a beautiful fic. I gave it a 7 in spelling and grammar because I found many usage mistakes, such as the misuse of "lied." Anyway, this really is beautiful. I could almost feel the emotion. Of course, I'm a Kikyo hater, so I think Inu Yasha should wind up with Kagome, but that's just my personal opinion. I really do hope you finish it. kuramafan58
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 10:07 CDT
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great story! Keep Up The Good Work!!!!
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: lunatrick114 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so much! the inu/kag fluff was great, but when do we get a lemon? hehe. Anyways, good job and update soon!! ^_^
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Title: **GaspS!**
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GaSpS** You read my story "Summer Love" So I read yours by request! It's REALLY GOOD! but may I say Why the FUCK does Kikyo have to ruin everything?? Wahhh! and Kagome and Inuyasha were just getting it on too! I hope Inuyasha kills the dead walking Bitch! Phew* I'm glad I got that out of my system! BTW Keep updating! I want to keep reading it! This is awesome! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! ^_^ Love you! ~Demonicslayer~~
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 31, 2004 18:40 CDT
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEHEE KILL KIKYO ALREADY GEEZ! THIS IS THERE 3rd time they were in this kinda posistion and INTERUPTED! grr!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: lunatrick On: August 27, 2004 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter! You're an excellent writer... i'm really enjoying reading this! please update asap! ^_^ btw, this is lunatrick114... i'm just too lazy to sign in. lol
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 26, 2004 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah.... umm good job DONT KILL INUYASHA! RAWR.. things are just getting good! make him come back :( i love it though continue writing!
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Title: keep going!
Reviewed By: lunatrick On: August 25, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is shaping up nicely! the cliffy was excellent. i really like this! please keep going!
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