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Reviewed By: Renate TX On: April 24, 2005 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to god if you don't update i'm gonna go insane! Please Please Pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: lunatrick114~ not signed in On: November 23, 2004 22:40 CST
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Wow. You really have a lot of stuff going on right now. First, my advice to you would be to stop worrying about you friend and start ACTING. Your friend needs help, ASAP!!! If this Scott dude is threatening her, abusing her pyschically, etc., you need to go to the police. And please, tell her NEVER to get into a car with him. She could be raped, or worse. Deal with this first, before you even think about writing. You know i love this story, but i'd hate for you to be emotionally drained and not write your best stuff. My thoughts are with you and your friend, sweetie! Please be safe, make sure to tell your friend what i said, and take care. We'll all be waiting for your next chap when stuff calms down in your life! ^_^
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Title: Damion_the_Fey
Reviewed By: Damion_the_Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop I love your story! I checked everyday for updates... Its beautiful and I wish you would continue! I think its excellent If you were to continue it would make me one happy fan! ^.~*
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: Suchii On: November 12, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh i am loving this so much! This is a really good story! i cant wait to see what happens next... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 19:14 CST
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hey hang in there i dont know exactly wat to tell u cause i havent had that problem but just try to stand by her and give her the best advice you can... dont ever give up hope and if u do need someone to talk to even though u dont know me i caan still listen and give u the best advice i can and i usualy can give some pretty good advice... think about it my email is Fire_Lover_2008@yahoo.com and yeah i do think u should go on with the story your a really good writer and i bet ppl love it just are hard at expressin it... dont quit trust me its really good... o and ask ur friend right out if its really worth it not to report it... does she really want to be hurt again... and watever u do u cant let her go to him... its really too dangerous if u dont know wat this guy is capable of...
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Reviewed By: lunatrick114 ~not signed in On: October 25, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, two comments. 1.) BEST CHAP EVER!!! and 2.) You are a very evil person! Finally getting into the good stuff, and you interrupt them..... AGAIN!! Grr! Oh well, you know I could never really be mad at you, Ikiwi! Lol! I can't get enough of this story! Write more soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shikon_no_tama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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GRRRRRr i hate naraku love the story i COMMAND you to finish it 10/10 ^_^ PLEEEEEEEASE MAKE inui and kagome make up in the next shapter PLEEEEEEEEEEASE
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Title: ooo
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 01:01 CDT
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you know wat it's sad funny and i want to kill kikyou and naraku why cant they just leave my fave couple alone why i ask well keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: Serenity Wintirs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 01:25 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!! Really Good Story.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 15:10 CDT
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Your last chapter has me so depressed! I'm a diehard Inu-Kag fan...and while I feel sorry for Kikyo, she is NOT the real Kikyo. When will Inuyasha realize that any promises he makes to the walking corpse are not being made to the woman he met 50 yrs ago?!? Yes, he owes Kikyo peace....but her soul (most of it at least) has moved on...Inuyasha has been given a chance at TRUE happiness with Kagome...she completes the circle..she accepts him for who Inuyasha is...demon, human, hanyou. Kikyo never did...even when she was alive...her obligation as miko and her views about youkai would only allow her to continue a relationship with Inuyasha if he made a wish to be human. I feel frustrated...your writing is great and it makes the situation that much more realistic...but my poor little heart wants Inu-Kag together...NOT torn apart like this. Sigh...
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 22:12 CDT
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wow... dramatic... I LOVE IT! pleez pleez pleez update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lunatrick On: September 19, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just noticed how often i've reviwed this fic, and u must be getting sick of me by now. Lol. Anyways, I've said it once and i'll say it again.... I LOVE THIS FIC! Please update again soon! ~lunatrick114~
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly a beautiful fic. I gave it a 7 in spelling and grammar because I found many usage mistakes, such as the misuse of "lied." Anyway, this really is beautiful. I could almost feel the emotion. Of course, I'm a Kikyo hater, so I think Inu Yasha should wind up with Kagome, but that's just my personal opinion. I really do hope you finish it. kuramafan58
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Reviewed By: FireFairy1465 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 10:07 CDT
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great story! Keep Up The Good Work!!!!
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: lunatrick114 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so much! the inu/kag fluff was great, but when do we get a lemon? hehe. Anyways, good job and update soon!! ^_^
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